homeIncest/TabooA Christmas SurprisePublic Comments

All Comments  for

A Christmas Surprise

byj3zza©
All
Comments (7)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Mr Wild willy12/04/06

Short But Sweet!

Good Story line. Could stand another chapter. I would love to see more of this. Good Quality writing and a good story line. It's a winner in my book.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Akireon03/31/08

Nice

I liked how you set up the initial sexual tension between these two, and how they followed through with their desire. The experimentation thing was nice. MMMM.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by hedonist6608/03/08

To "Strange":

If a gorgeous young woman was coming on to me, it wouldn't matter how much I knew about her, or if I'd EVER seen her before, I'd jump right in bed with her! Great story j3zza, and nicely told. Keep writing.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Lady_Blackhawk09/26/09

One word!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/05/12

half a story

i really hate when writers post less than half a story. this needs more background, more buildup to sex and a good end. what happens now do they transfer to the same college? do they ever do it again? do the parents find out? does she get pregnant? half a story is worse than no story at all either finish it or delete it but don't leave it like this.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by rightbank05/31/14

I know it has been a while

but I would love to read more

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous12/27/14

I

I would love to read more

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Christmas Surprise  or
More submissions by j3zza.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel