All Comments on 'I Imagine'

Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit's house

With a piece mindful

Of solitary souls

Looking for the missing piece.

BTW - 'rhythym' slipped through; should be rhythm;

the key I use is rhy- th(e)m & me...rhythm & rhyme

Such a wonderful poem...filled with longing...yet hope and promise. Here's to you finding Him one day, darlin'.

This was a beautiful, moving poem. I don't read a lot of them, but I understood (or at least thought I did...I have to admit I'm clueless about poetry) what you were saying and it was touching. Nice job and thanks for an entertaining read.

stunning!!

not as cliche ridden as most poems on this topic. Could use a little tightening here and there, but a respectable first submission. Thanks for sharing this with Lit.!

And very well done, kiten. I look forward to more from you.

As sack said, difficult not to be cliched, but you avoided the trap.

Really enjoyed this.

Elle

Something struck me with this poem. Wonderfully written and simply beautiful.

Very nice.

Kiten69, I really like how this speaks clearly and honestly of need and desire and hope. The first rule of good writing is to have something to say - and you do. The second rule is to say it as honestly as possible - and you have. Bravo for opening up for our enjoyment.

Kisssss you nipple!!!!

thank you for these wonderful words, I know how you feel.

Thank you for sharing. I very much enjoyed that.