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Sweet
I'm not sure that is the right word, but it was very nice.
Very different
LYG,
Definately different from your normal stories. This is a very different style and I like it as much as your other stories. You are very talented.
Noticed a review of your story...
So I came to check it out and I'm very glad I did.
Very hot and sexy and I loved the way you described your characters and the feelings and emotions they were both experiencing.
janiexx
Very nice!
I like the way things kinda snuck up on him in plain sight. It's much more delicious that way.
Thanks.
Phil
Nice style!
While I liked the story very much, it was this writer's almost rambling, conversational style that I found most appealing. The way the Writer had of describing his characters good and bad points made it an interesting story. Endearing! intimately sexy. Terrific Write!
Your story.....
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Very Good
Interesting read. Unusual way of meeting the girl next door.
Boyd
Very Nice
My appreciation for a beautiful little tale, beautifully told. A tip of my hat to the author.
Nothing more or less...
than another great story by a very good writer.
Just keep them coming, please! "Loving Wives", "Romance", "Non-Erotic", whatever. Just keep them coming.
Cheers!
A good 'Romance'
is always a nice read.
And. did you notice - extremely rarely disected like loving wives stories are...
Speaking Of Disection - We need
about 10 more of you coming at us from unique and varied directions as you do - so well. Also nice was the fact that no one was mugged or disrespected.
Author - you are appreciated and hopefully preparing another in the near future.
With Very High Regard
Wow! A very nice romantic story...
I think this is about your best so far - very concise and a good erotic romance. Well done!
Outstanding!
A truly erotic and romantic journey by two obsessed and damaged personalities. This was one hell of a story!
Great Work!
It's really beautifully written. I like the honesty of the main character and the theme.
WOW! Unexpected!!
I have to agree with DesertPirate. It was very different, but amazingly sweet as well. I have to say I really loved this story. I intend to read more of your stories in the near future. Great Job!
Facinating ides -
To just let go and follow that course - take that somewhat significant risk and find your way to a new and better lifestyle - neat theme
Hmmm, want sure what to expect...
Even once I'd started it there was a lot of time I want sure I got it, which is odd considering its not that long of a story, but I enjoyed both the ride and the destination...
Lovely, but ...
Very romantic with a satisfying denouement, but I had a problem with both characters. I tried to imagine myself in Shela's place and could not see how or why she would have behaved as she did. Why or how she became so fixated on Jerry when she had trust issues with men. Couldn't do it. It just didn't make any sense.
At the same time Jerry didn't add up either. Years of failures to have a mature relation with any woman should have had an impact on his views. But it was and if he were completely unformed in his identity.
Overall, a clever story but not quite fully satisfying. Thanks for the offering.
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