All Comments on 'Love Bites'

by LibidinousQT

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Fun!

Fun character, interesting ideas! Good luck in the contest :)

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hilarious Read!

A wonderful story in the good spirit of the Season. A pick up at a bar by the main character sets this delightful scary tale in motion. While he is a little put off by her name - Kim - things take a nice change for the better. Compatible? Werewolfs and vampires - Yeah! Enjoyable read!

Kev HKev Hover 17 years ago
Fun and sexy in equal measure...

...is a sure formula for delight. Thanks for the grins.

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Your friendly neighborhood werewolf

and his vampire girlfriend. Great story with a clever depiction of timeless characters. Good luck in the contest.

JoiseyMadisonJoiseyMadisonover 17 years ago
Clever

As someone who generally tends to fall into the comedic genre, I thought this was a sexy read as well as one that produced a few chuckles. Good job and good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
*Grins*

I really enjoy your writing style - its erotic without being dimestore-paperback trashy. I will definitely be checking out your other submissions!

Angelindisguise223xAngelindisguise223xover 17 years ago
Sweet!

I'm applauding you, as well as giving you a 100, though I feel as though it's more of a 95... I love the story right up until the end... I felt as though the last few sentences in which he got her to stay with him weren't enough... perhaps a sequel? In any case... the writing is wonderful! Congrats and good luck!

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 16 years ago
nice

i really enjoyed it. Well written bent on an old theme.

angelx602angelx602almost 15 years ago
Nicely done

I love Vampire and Werwolf erotica and to have them both in one story is a real treat. Wonderful.

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