All Comments on 'The Train'

Excellent little piece of ass. If this is the first story you have posted, we hope there will be more. This one got my man so hot, we fucked all night. Please give us more!

That was a very erotic story and a little fantasy of mine. I really enjoyed it.

The style of writing worked really well with this story but if you are going to continue with that style keep your stories short and full of romance and passion, otherwise it could be a little teduious and cheesy.

I do think however you have a hell of a lot of talent (better than mine I dare say) and would love to read more of your work!

Wife riding the train home after a mind numbing day gets assualted by a mystery man. After collapsing she confronts her mystery man. Enjoy the surprise! Clever story! Well written!

that was such an adorably ending! I loved this story! great job!

This has long been a fantasy of mine. Well written and i loved that it was her lover doing it. Nice, thrilling but safe. well done! nicki uk

Makes me wish we had a subway here.

What an awesome account of exciting love. loved it

I was so wrapped up in the train action......got to say, for once, I did not see the end coming. Great read.

I soooo wanted to read something like this from a very long time. I have been reading on literotica from a very long time but this is the first time i am writing a comment. Great job. Loved it.

Wow that was so hot.... amazing story. Only objection was the "husband" part. Would have been much hotter if it was an actual stranger.... the fact that it was her husband took away from the thrill and excitement of the hot encounter.

i wouldnt have been happy if i had been hubby after all she thought it was a stranger and would have acted the same if it had have been