All Comments on 'Oh Pretty Baby'

by JohnFranks

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
vasectomy?

how very sneaky! loved it!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Interesting story!

Nicky wants a baby and who better for the father than the old guy next door. After interviewing him extensively they settle down to make the miracle happen. A delightful Read. Well Written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
How deliciously clever!

Very very slick! I loved tit!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good

Really liked it. Sorry not a full member. But my e-mail address is ou812mature@hotmail.com

LunaLoverLunaLoveralmost 17 years ago
Very nice

I loved the fact that he had his own secret..but afterward I couldn't help but think.. maybe she didn't want a child but a sex partner with no attachments herself. She could have been on the pill but never told him. I know you're the author, but that was just my thoughts following reading your well written story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Delightful

I smiled at the ending, Slick in deed. JV

22pilgrim22pilgrimover 16 years ago
What a Lovely Twist !

A cracking good read !

lonelyhdlonelyhdover 6 years ago
Great!!

I actually did laugh out loud. And no, I wouldn't have said anything either

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I loved this little story!

Short and oh, so sweet. The last paragraph/question made me laugh. Actually, I'm still smiling. I'm a very heterosexual female so I can only imagine how a man would receive that last paragraph/question.

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