by Cub4ucme
I scrolled down the page and thought, "too damn long." Then I read the first two lines: "I wouldn't call you selfish/you don't sell fish" and I thought, "too damn corny." I don't know why I started reading the rest of the poem. At first, I wanted to dislike it. I didn't want to sit there, reading, and thinking, "too damn good." But I did.
By the way, literotica's poetry forum--be there or be square.
What a debut! Welcome to Lit (if you're not an alt) I join Eve with a formal invitation to The Cunt Club - AKA The Poetry Discussion Forum.
Tess
Very enjoyable poetry. I hope the creative writing classes help with getting stuff published. Does the diploma come with a literary agent attached?
Welcome, Carrie.
I've got the attention spam of a goldfish usually, but you kept me alert and sucking up every word thru this lengthy piece. Tempo, attitude and dry wit in a well balanced mix.
I want you wolfman. After reading this I need to find my buzz tool and dream about you in ecstacy. (((kisses))
Jen