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by Anonymous

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by sack10/10/06

wow...really creepy....

I had to read to the end, this one wasn't predictable at all. Great revenge tale....good luck!

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by duddle14610/10/06

Creepy with a Touch of Terror.

Cecelia's perdictament goes from bad to worse and finally sinks into a complete terrifying experience. Wonderfully scary!

Good Luck in the Contest!

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by LadyCibelle10/10/06

Really...

creepy. :) Unexpected and well written.

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by TE99910/10/06

So close...

and yet so far. I loved this story! Creepy as the dickens, and a dynamite ending. This is a winner. Good luck in the contest.

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by RogueLurker10/11/06

definitely a cautionary tale ...

Some great twists and a rather gruesome premise. You kept me guessing all the way through. Great story

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by Anonymous10/14/06

Interesting premise!

Really interesting premise! I think the writing could be tightened up a little to enhance the readability and heighten the tension, but in all a very good effort. 'Course... I wanna know where the stalker got a flesh-eating virus! hehe :)

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by Munachi10/26/06

great story...

very creepy!

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Awe. Some.

Well-written and fun. Cecelia was just enough of a bitch to enjoy seeing her get her come-uppance. It reminded me a bit of "SAW" with the whole Q&A, make the right choice, and cautionary message. I totally dug it.

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by Toa_lin10/27/06

Excelent

GREAT story Ungender, as good as I've come to hope and expect from you. Keep up the amazing work.

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by Anonymous04/19/07

FanFREAKingtastic!

Got any more of this caliber?

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by Anonymous03/29/09

loved it!

Would anyone think less of me, if I mentioned how hot I found Cecelia? one sexy cruel bitch!

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by VyresOfTheArt04/16/14

Wow, what a creepy story. O_o

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