Laura is intrigued by a big tipper. A most satisfying story of a white man and a black woman. I loved the way this Writer described her capturing her appearance. Very sensuous and Hot!
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Anonymous10/17/06
Nice beginning . . .
You say you like to write, yet you wrote so little. And still that little was so very hot, romantic and full of promise! Keep up the good work, always leaving us wanting more!
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Anonymous10/17/06
Great Start!
i can't wait to see what developes with these two!!! good job and keep it going!
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Anonymous02/04/07
trash
be real, this is garbage, black women dont like white boys
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Anonymous02/27/07
Definitely not true!
I'm a (young) black woman, and I date outside of my race. In fact, I tend to be more attracted to men outside of my race, and there are many other people who feel the same way that I do. So, how about you grow up, pull your head out of the ground and pretend to have a few brain cells?
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Anonymous04/02/07
HOT & REALISTIC
I LOVE YOUR STORY & IM WAITING IN SUSPENCE FOR MORE.
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Anonymous04/02/07
love it
dark skinned women always fascinated me. they are very sexy. and those curves...wow. instant hard on.
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Anonymous06/20/07
fabulous story-line
i do find myself more attracted to an intelligent, well-dressed caucasian than to a thugged out black boy pretending to be a man.
Loved the way it started out ..... and groaned when I got to the end!! Either take it down, or write chapter 2 ... and as for the previous poster who says black girls dont like white guys .... if that were true, why do we have an interracial section??
...and a black woman myself, let me just say that there are a lot of black women (like myself) who are attracted to men of all races. Now that that's out of the way...
English
Wonderful story!
Laura is intrigued by a big tipper. A most satisfying story of a white man and a black woman. I loved the way this Writer described her capturing her appearance. Very sensuous and Hot!
Nice beginning . . .
You say you like to write, yet you wrote so little. And still that little was so very hot, romantic and full of promise! Keep up the good work, always leaving us wanting more!
Great Start!
i can't wait to see what developes with these two!!! good job and keep it going!
trash
be real, this is garbage, black women dont like white boys
Definitely not true!
I'm a (young) black woman, and I date outside of my race. In fact, I tend to be more attracted to men outside of my race, and there are many other people who feel the same way that I do. So, how about you grow up, pull your head out of the ground and pretend to have a few brain cells?
HOT & REALISTIC
I LOVE YOUR STORY & IM WAITING IN SUSPENCE FOR MORE.
love it
dark skinned women always fascinated me. they are very sexy. and those curves...wow. instant hard on.
fabulous story-line
i do find myself more attracted to an intelligent, well-dressed caucasian than to a thugged out black boy pretending to be a man.
Great beginning
I love how you captured each character....giving them there own secert lust for each other...i cant wait to read more!!!!
wish there was more!!
Loved the way it started out ..... and groaned when I got to the end!! Either take it down, or write chapter 2 ... and as for the previous poster who says black girls dont like white guys .... if that were true, why do we have an interracial section??
As the author of this story...
...and a black woman myself, let me just say that there are a lot of black women (like myself) who are attracted to men of all races. Now that that's out of the way...
second chapter's up guys!!!
~Green :)
I mean it will be really soon!
I've submitted it.
I'm hooked!
Want more (giggle)
Dayum!
I Loved it! I'm hooked! I too want more!!!
*****
Excellent.
Beautiful
start thus far...
Good start.
This is so very promising. Looking forward to the next chapter.
-Jaz
Good beginning!
Do you plan on writing more?
I Love It !!
I know it's been years but I just found it ! And I really liked the start of your story!!
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