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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/13/06

Skakey.........

...couplets that drift in and out then fall apart completely quite early on, odd use of capitals all irritated me. I started to read but looked away before the finish. Sorry.

Tess

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by LeBroz12/12/06

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Weak
Inconsistent structure makes no sense; detracts from what you may be trying to say.

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by duddle14612/17/06

Fini

Love as important as yesterdays junk mail. End of a love affair?

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by tazz31706/14/12

A GIRLS WORST NIGHTMARE

boys only want 1 thing. TK U MLJ LV NV

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