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Laundry Tales 01: Twins' Charade

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by Aurora Black10/11/06

Oh My!

That was a *cough* very interesting *moan* portrayal of St. George and the dragon, Jeanne. Stimulating drama. *wink*

Good luck.

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by Selena_Kitt10/11/06

Delightfully wicked!

I love the ghost telling ghost stories... how fun! :)

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by duddle14610/11/06

Ye ole Erotica!

Most little boys have a Nanny to love and care for them. With the twins they have Martha, a ghost nanny. So when the twins start getting older, Martha joins them in erotic Halloween activities. Fun Read!

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by sack10/11/06

Loved it!!

delightfully different and told with the confidence of a master storyteller. Thanks for submitting this!

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by TE99910/11/06

Mmmmm...a Martha sandwich

There's an old couplet about a knight boinking a maiden and St. George and his spear in the dragons mouth but it slips my mind. This reminds me of that, but I digress. Great story. Pleasantly erotic. Good luck in the contest.

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by Darkniciad10/11/06

Unique angle

I liked the idea of being put into the story, and being told by a ghost. All unique, and quite a bit of heat as well. Good luck in the contest!

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by 10/12/06

Lovely, slow, erotic build-up

And a squirm-inducing climax.

Loved the last line, as well. :)

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by Munachi10/12/06

nice story...

liked the idea with the ghost telling the story that is retold in the story...

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by past_perfect10/08/08

Great story

I am turning into a laundry tale addict here... very well done.

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