All Comments on 'A Physical Sin'

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DirtyAliceBlackDirtyAliceBlackover 17 years ago
Sexy!!!

I thought that was one of the best stories I have ever read in this category ;)

Orion623Orion623over 17 years ago
Very Hot

A great sequel. Nice descriptive writing. What's next? Will the brither find out he has had sex with his sister? One more installment, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Pretty Damn Good

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Pretty damn good, but MORE, (please).

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Good, but Maybe a Bit Longer?

Your story is great, but I wish the individual chapters were a bit longer. Still, as long as you are going to continue the story, and soon, I am sure we will all be very happy to continue reading.

sexmatesexmateover 17 years ago
Nice!

Hot story that good go further!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I loved it!

What a wonderfully erotic story. I loved the detail and the pace that went along with this naughty little tale.

You made me so hard here at work that I had to go to the men's room to stroke myself while imagining my sister was anonomously fucking me while dressed in a Catwoman suit!!

Please, write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
The plot was great but sex in a toilet stall is --

a real turn off for me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Surprise

Nah. I'm hoping Princess Leia will drag me into a corner and let me stroke her wookie.

Caught me off guard and I just had to laugh!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
getting in your hole at last

great story a physical sin.so very erotic and kinky.

another part please. excellent writing and story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
hot story

i wish this story could be true as it is really hot has all the elements i like.

p.s i wish i was that brother believe me

camr4656camr4656about 10 years ago
Sure hope you can add more.

It would be great if you could add more to this story. Lots of possibilities. Un-protected sex, baby later on, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
HOT... Great job

more would be appreciated. Since Sis already knows who he is, she might have kate meet him at the motel, let him stew at her tardiness while letting him get plastered, then take advantage of him in a darkened room .

brirob51brirob51almost 6 years ago

I really hope you do a sequel to this story; It ended badly, but could be a great lead in to the next chapter.

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