A great sequel. Nice descriptive writing. What's next? Will the brither find out he has had sex with his sister? One more installment, please!
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Anonymous10/18/06
Pretty Damn Good
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Pretty damn good, but MORE, (please).
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Anonymous10/18/06
Very Good, but Maybe a Bit Longer?
Your story is great, but I wish the individual chapters were a bit longer. Still, as long as you are going to continue the story, and soon, I am sure we will all be very happy to continue reading.
Hot story that good go further!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
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11/11/06
I loved it!
What a wonderfully erotic story. I loved the detail and the pace that went along with this naughty little tale.
You made me so hard here at work that I had to go to the men's room to stroke myself while imagining my sister was anonomously fucking me while dressed in a Catwoman suit!!
Please, write more.
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Anonymous02/29/08
The plot was great but sex in a toilet stall is --
a real turn off for me
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Anonymous05/23/08
Surprise
Nah. I'm hoping Princess Leia will drag me into a corner and let me stroke her wookie.
Caught me off guard and I just had to laugh!
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Anonymous03/28/09
getting in your hole at last
great story a physical sin.so very erotic and kinky.
another part please. excellent writing and story
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Anonymous02/26/11
hot story
i wish this story could be true as it is really hot has all the elements i like.
It would be great if you could add more to this story. Lots of possibilities. Un-protected sex, baby later on, etc.
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Anonymous11/25/14
HOT... Great job
more would be appreciated. Since Sis already knows who he is, she might have kate meet him at the motel, let him stew at her tardiness while letting him get plastered, then take advantage of him in a darkened room .
Sexy!!!
I thought that was one of the best stories I have ever read in this category ;)
Very Hot
A great sequel. Nice descriptive writing. What's next? Will the brither find out he has had sex with his sister? One more installment, please!
Pretty Damn Good
`
Pretty damn good, but MORE, (please).
Very Good, but Maybe a Bit Longer?
Your story is great, but I wish the individual chapters were a bit longer. Still, as long as you are going to continue the story, and soon, I am sure we will all be very happy to continue reading.
Nice!
Hot story that good go further!
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
I loved it!
What a wonderfully erotic story. I loved the detail and the pace that went along with this naughty little tale.
You made me so hard here at work that I had to go to the men's room to stroke myself while imagining my sister was anonomously fucking me while dressed in a Catwoman suit!!
Please, write more.
The plot was great but sex in a toilet stall is --
a real turn off for me
Surprise
Nah. I'm hoping Princess Leia will drag me into a corner and let me stroke her wookie.
Caught me off guard and I just had to laugh!
getting in your hole at last
great story a physical sin.so very erotic and kinky.
another part please. excellent writing and story
hot story
i wish this story could be true as it is really hot has all the elements i like.
p.s i wish i was that brother believe me
Sure hope you can add more.
It would be great if you could add more to this story. Lots of possibilities. Un-protected sex, baby later on, etc.
HOT... Great job
more would be appreciated. Since Sis already knows who he is, she might have kate meet him at the motel, let him stew at her tardiness while letting him get plastered, then take advantage of him in a darkened room .
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