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Holy shit
What a great story Tc..I loved the characters, their depth, thier humor..the humor added so much to the story, showed the complexity of the characters and how the dynamics between them transpired.
Wonderful and sexy work..loved it.
Great story
I loved this story ... Hot, romantic, humorous with a hint of mystery and more than a dash of heat. Well done .. a fantatic entry for the contest.
Mmm
Great job, TC! Your characters are very likeable. Good luck in the contest.
Not my category...
but you write it well! Whew! Good luck :)
Nice work, TC!
Happy Halloween & good luck in the contest!
WOW!
That's all I can say...just "WOW!"
Impressive
Great plot and character portrayal. Good luck in the contest.
Loved it
Oh my Goodness I Loved it alot.
A kick ass read...
is what I always expect from you Tom and you always deliver. Good luck and happy halloween, hon!
Truly amazing
Great characters, a heartfelt love and smoking hot sex--what more could a reader ask for?
Happy Halloween
What a terrific read TC, of course, coming from you I knew it would be. Super job with the characters, I felt like I knew each one.
Never disappointed
This isn't usually a category I read but since it was you I did. I wasn't disaapointed, but then I rarely am with your characters and clever, well paced plotlines. Good luck TC
Fantastic
well yet again you have proved what a wonderful writer you are. Thankyou
Awesomeness.
Loved it all.
Delicious- absolutely and completely.
Really enjoyed this- the story was funny and smart; the sex was v. hot; and for once the portrayal of fems was not insultingly stereotypical.. Grand, Grand work.
Enjoyable!
I loved this story, very tasteful and engaging. Thank you for sharing.
Hilarious
I loved this story. I about died laughing for half the part and Em was super sweet. Keep up the great work.
Fun story!
Really enjoyed it.
Gideon and Em were great!
A wonderful, very readable story. Like others, I found the character development superbly realistic. And could readily relate to Gideon's attraction to Em. One night while on temporary duty assignment to Thailand in 1965, I lustily chased after a beautiful but rather flat-chested female after having consumed more drinks that I can recall. When Thai bar girls called out to warn me in broken English that I was chasing a Katoey (transsexual), I pretended not to understand and renewed my efforts to catch up to her as she quickly exited the bar. I caught up to her after a brief chase, and we made love on a blanket under the stars with a full moon shinning brightly. It was like Gideon and Em. Only her saliva provided the lubricant and she climaxed without any contact with her small flaccid penis.
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