Typical ending for a 'Romance'.
It did falter and take too long to 'reconcile' the two heroes. Sort of drifted nowhere in particular for a while there, for me anyways.
Still and all, a good read.
A really enjoyable tale. The story has a neat flow to it. I think it points out that when we acknowledge our biological needs and act on them we are always the happiest. Penny and Rocky seem to be excellent heroes, too. It's also amazing just who is under the helmet of many of the bikers.
This story more than makes up for "Life's too short"! It had a great flow, and although we knew what was going to happen, we enjoyed the journey! The story had great "flow" and good, consistent characters.
A female Writer makes her way through the publishing world doing book signings and managing to stay an independent person. This is no easy feat as she becomes more and more wealthy. Interesting Story. Good Read!
A truly enjoyable read. It really is nice to, every once in awhile, get away from the anger and sorrow and delve into a sweet romance. A thank you to The Wanderer.
by
11/03/06
On reading this again, I think
I'll go ahead and take a flyer on a different version of this. It's a great song with plenty of material for a good story.
I liked what you have done with this ... people are so quick to judge - and all too often wrongly.
... I wrote a german comment to an english story. My english is not good enough to express my feelings. Du erzählst eine der schönsten Geschichten dieses Genres. Guter Plot, eine gute Prämisse und dazu noch ein herzerwärmender Inhalt. Ich konnte mich gut in die Charaktere hineinversetzen. Ich habe die Geschichte beim Lesen miterlebt und ich denke, das ist das schönste Kompliment, was man einem Autor machen kann. Als Autor wünsche ich mir, dass ich meine Leser nicht nur unterhalten kann, sondern dass sie vom Stoff so gefesselt sind , dass sie nicht aufhören können zu lesen, bevor die Geschichte zu Ende ist.
I've read a lot of english stories since beeing one year at english Literotica and I must admit that this story is one of the stories I would ever remember. I've been fixed mostly to the lw-genre but I don't regret my decision to read some of the romance-genre.
Sincere regards
Nucleus
by
Anonymous12/05/08
You know you enjoy an author
When you begin rationing their stories so you don't run out. Oh, and their stories list gets bookmarked.
by
Anonymous02/03/09
Simply Lovely!
I truly enjoyed your story! and as others have said before, Definite book material here!! keep writing!
Enjoyed reading this
Typical ending for a 'Romance'.
It did falter and take too long to 'reconcile' the two heroes. Sort of drifted nowhere in particular for a while there, for me anyways.
Still and all, a good read.
Excellent story
A really enjoyable tale. The story has a neat flow to it. I think it points out that when we acknowledge our biological needs and act on them we are always the happiest. Penny and Rocky seem to be excellent heroes, too. It's also amazing just who is under the helmet of many of the bikers.
Good Story
A good story as always.
Wanderer, IMHO
This story more than makes up for "Life's too short"! It had a great flow, and although we knew what was going to happen, we enjoyed the journey! The story had great "flow" and good, consistent characters.
Loved the Story!
A female Writer makes her way through the publishing world doing book signings and managing to stay an independent person. This is no easy feat as she becomes more and more wealthy. Interesting Story. Good Read!
You've got the knack
great job! I haven't enjoyed a story so much since yesterday when I read your last. Thank you again. LYG
Thanks
I loved your story, it was very entertaining and i'm a sucker for a happy ending!
Just Damn good
Entertainment is meant to entertain and you do know how to do that you old Sod.
Thank you
PT
No surprises
Just another fine piece of work. I do so enjoy your writing Wanderer. Keep it up.
Nice!
Wow! This is really good... it even has enough to be made into a book... :)
Excellent
A truly enjoyable read. It really is nice to, every once in awhile, get away from the anger and sorrow and delve into a sweet romance. A thank you to The Wanderer.
On reading this again, I think
I'll go ahead and take a flyer on a different version of this. It's a great song with plenty of material for a good story.
I liked what you have done with this ... people are so quick to judge - and all too often wrongly.
You tell a great story!
Regards, Jack
It' s not the first time ...
... I wrote a german comment to an english story. My english is not good enough to express my feelings. Du erzählst eine der schönsten Geschichten dieses Genres. Guter Plot, eine gute Prämisse und dazu noch ein herzerwärmender Inhalt. Ich konnte mich gut in die Charaktere hineinversetzen. Ich habe die Geschichte beim Lesen miterlebt und ich denke, das ist das schönste Kompliment, was man einem Autor machen kann. Als Autor wünsche ich mir, dass ich meine Leser nicht nur unterhalten kann, sondern dass sie vom Stoff so gefesselt sind , dass sie nicht aufhören können zu lesen, bevor die Geschichte zu Ende ist.
I've read a lot of english stories since beeing one year at english Literotica and I must admit that this story is one of the stories I would ever remember. I've been fixed mostly to the lw-genre but I don't regret my decision to read some of the romance-genre.
Sincere regards
Nucleus
You know you enjoy an author
When you begin rationing their stories so you don't run out. Oh, and their stories list gets bookmarked.
Simply Lovely!
I truly enjoyed your story! and as others have said before, Definite book material here!! keep writing!
I really enjoyed this story. Would love to read about the other characters too
best yet
i really like this story a lot. i've read most of your stories and this one is the best.
It was always CRYSTAL clear but CRYSTAL couldn't see it.
A nice romance.However, a bit more romantic interaction after their final reunion would have been nice. IMO.
Nonetheless, its a 5.
Just a wonderful story.
A very fine romance and nice to see the woman be the blind one when looking for love for a change.
Thank you for writing. 5 stars
if there could be a moral to the story it would be
heed your own counsel.
listen to your guides
ignore the image described by the blind
Good Story. Could Have Been Better Written.
Four Stars. Nuff said.
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