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Soccer-Mom Unit Ch. 02

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by Anonymous10/19/06

And What of this " Marcia"

Ok, the plot is developing, some more action by the casserole-eating husband is expected shortly, a PI to be put on the case no doubt.
And More of Robot Innards Exposed.

The ends of the plot, like a wet circuit board, are loose. We have three (possibly four) female/ female simulacra to pick from, all wandering around (naked?) in this ultra high tech suburban house? (credulity is ... strained)

So some 'plot development' and less descriptive narrative please.

You seem to have strung the 36+ series out to a whopping 35 episodes .. and no, I did not read them in full, but that too seemed mostly narrative.

So, from me to you, " Bring on the Dancing Girls", "Enough of the Poet"

Yours, Kilroy

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