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excellent
I like this one
mention
this poem mentioned in the new poem reviews
well paired....
...image and script. Crisp and clean. The words tell a tale of unexpected passion in abrupt - almost unemotional language. An interesting mixture and well done.
Perhaps the last line should have been "unrepentent knight"? :-)
I like this a lot and am sorry not to be able to vote but I do know the reason.
Tess
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sensational session
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Your new one is your best, in my opinion. Words as good as image in this one.
Even though I have chosen to avoid your poetry for personal reason, I peeked anyway. I would have given it a 5. :)
My Erotic Trail…
Thank you as always for your kind words and mention in New Poems Reviews. Go on, hand draw your ‘art’; treat us w/ an illustrated poem. We want to come up and see your etchings!
Art, you hold Literotica in check with your attentiveness to the site, its poets and authors. You encourage me with comments to not just my work, but to many others. Your body of work, comments and threads raise our standard bar. For that alone I thank you! ‘Keep the drive alive’ it is said in sport.
Tristesse2...
thank you for exacting your comments which so suit the poem. Savvy you! I did not see that one might make a connection with the closure. Your ‘critical’ eye caught that. Nice! That said the title speaks to the nymph’s dream. Come nighttime, she / he did not by any stretch feel unrepentant! :-)
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Words well chosen
Picture too;
Combo that can only be called
Hot.
LeBroz in — NY - too far from Atlanta...
thanks a bunch. Much appreciated mate!
Leon, what I said to Art also so holds true for you. You work endlessly honouring those who contribute to Lit. Not only that, you foster a much-needed spirit of fellowship among poets/authors. We can only feel but grateful.
EXCELLENT WORK
thought this was great.
Dark passions.
Beautiful black and white photo lends itself to establishing an intimate erotic mood. A sensual rendering. Top Notch.
TO DREAM OR SLEEP
with toys, chemistry and indiscretion, TK U MLJ LV NV
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