Thanks for the intro....skipped the story entirely.
Wish more authors would do that.
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Anonymous10/19/06
can't wait read next installment
hot, a few grammer errors, but still hot
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Anonymous10/19/06
Awesome
Awesome. Please continue. Looking forward to the humiliation part.
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Anonymous10/19/06
Excellent Story - Keep it up!
I'm looking forward to the next chapters . . .
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Anonymous10/20/06
Wow..Yea that is easy
Thanks. I didn't bother to read your story.. but I really appreciate it that you gave me a heads up on content. Too bad others can't be so nice. Good luck with your writing. Tom
Great beginning!! You write very well. Normally I prefer this type of story from the cuckold's vantage point, but this is great. I can't wait for more.
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Anonymous10/20/06
A Great Story
do you think the husband ever figure that the wife was reading his stories?
Atlanta,Ga
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Anonymous10/20/06
Moving Forward
Good story! I'm interested in this story moving forward for this loving, married couple, where the wife becomes more dominant with her husband but surprizingly and perhaps somewhat reluctantly becomes submissive to her lover/master.
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Anonymous07/19/08
Lost
Ya lost me with the first paragraph.
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Anonymous01/21/09
Lifelike
Great lifelike story, let us see how this story develops.
This is so hot! I love when my husband licks my big fat ass, I hope her holes stretched out by big superior cocks, I can't wait to read the rest ofthe story.
I'm really looking forward to where this story goes. As someone else said, it feels very real and lifelike. And I for one very much appreciate hearing it told from a woman's point of view, it is more intersting and exciting that way
English
Wow... that was easy!
Thanks for the intro....skipped the story entirely.
Wish more authors would do that.
can't wait read next installment
hot, a few grammer errors, but still hot
Awesome
Awesome. Please continue. Looking forward to the humiliation part.
Excellent Story - Keep it up!
I'm looking forward to the next chapters . . .
Wow..Yea that is easy
Thanks. I didn't bother to read your story.. but I really appreciate it that you gave me a heads up on content. Too bad others can't be so nice. Good luck with your writing. Tom
Very hot
Great beginning!! You write very well. Normally I prefer this type of story from the cuckold's vantage point, but this is great. I can't wait for more.
A Great Story
do you think the husband ever figure that the wife was reading his stories?
Atlanta,Ga
Moving Forward
Good story! I'm interested in this story moving forward for this loving, married couple, where the wife becomes more dominant with her husband but surprizingly and perhaps somewhat reluctantly becomes submissive to her lover/master.
Lost
Ya lost me with the first paragraph.
Lifelike
Great lifelike story, let us see how this story develops.
Nice!
This is so hot! I love when my husband licks my big fat ass, I hope her holes stretched out by big superior cocks, I can't wait to read the rest ofthe story.
nice start!
I'm really looking forward to where this story goes. As someone else said, it feels very real and lifelike. And I for one very much appreciate hearing it told from a woman's point of view, it is more intersting and exciting that way
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