I hope that you are planning to write more stories.
like single-malt; more and soon please.
a hot little yarn
That was a hot hot story, I enjoyed it immensely!!!! Can I Be Cameron? Have fun this weekend. Perhaps write a story about it? Hmmm.....
you made me so fucking hot!!! I loved it. wish it was me with you!!
Hot and Sexy!
Thank you for a great read!
Good story, nice build-up, excellent feel for atmosphere -- maybe your grammar and your tenses need a little review to make the reading easier. Keep on writing!
Wasn't too fond of the hair descriptions.
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Good story
I hope that you are planning to write more stories.
ditto: Your characterization and dialogue flow
like single-malt; more and soon please.
great first story
a hot little yarn
Awesome story
That was a hot hot story, I enjoyed it immensely!!!! Can I Be Cameron? Have fun this weekend. Perhaps write a story about it? Hmmm.....
mmmmmmm
you made me so fucking hot!!! I loved it. wish it was me with you!!
GREAT!
Hot and Sexy!
Very Nice!
Thank you for a great read!
Good one!
Good story, nice build-up, excellent feel for atmosphere -- maybe your grammar and your tenses need a little review to make the reading easier.
Keep on writing!
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Wasn't too fond of the hair descriptions.
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