All Comments on 'Just Business Ch. 01'

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MarilynmwfMarilynmwfover 17 years ago
Very definitely a top grade presentation

Reminds me of an incident in my own life.

Mine was much different but the story recalled it for me and made my pussy tingle as it recalled the event

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good start

Then later on they can spend a night in a hotel and it progressed to only oral. after a few monthts it progressed to actual sexual intercourse.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hungry Anticipation!

Jim and Charlene come up with a way of satisfying each other without touching. Tenderly told, and in spite of not having any actual contact this was a really intimately hot story.

Wonderful Read! Great idea made better by clever plot twists!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very hot, very

well written, and really well done. I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What a hot ride! Is it too cliche...

To say this story drove me wild? I feel like a road trip..

Great Story!

~M

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice Job!

A story told very well! I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was believable and hot. And it leads the reader's mind immediately to the possibilities to come. Nice job!

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