What a great plot! Older recently divorced man starts looking at his young female neighbor who finally hangs out her own sign showing the time he should arrive at her place. The stuff from which erotic fantasies are made. Throughly delightful and a fun read. Enjoyable!
The fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
The fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
(Reposted, as I'd planned to award 75 points, so this should average out.)
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Nice build up
good stuff - well written, not like some of the other drivel I've read
Old Guy Fantasy!
What a great plot! Older recently divorced man starts looking at his young female neighbor who finally hangs out her own sign showing the time he should arrive at her place. The stuff from which erotic fantasies are made. Throughly delightful and a fun read. Enjoyable!
Recent Anonymous entry should have been duddle146
Air of authenticity
The fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
Air of authenticity
The fact that the girl was planning to leave, and would never have to deal with the consequences of her erotic adventure, adds a definite touch of truth to your story.
(Reposted, as I'd planned to award 75 points, so this should average out.)
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