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Cinderella Story with a Twist

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by Anonymous

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by 10/27/06

Not bad for a first

story. With practice and refinement, you should do well. Good luck.

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by Anonymous10/27/06

not bad, but not good

i think that if you had some one to edit your work; your stories would be wonderful.

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by jzimmerli03/22/07

I agree

an editor is needed. Just simple mistakes like caps and so forth. I will have to read the next to see if it gets better.

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by VioletBlair01/19/11

Really good

I liked it, only thing you should check your spelling/punctuation a bit, but otherwise, great story, very good pace and sweet.

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by Anonymous05/15/13

Beautiful story

I loved your story, please continue the story if possible.

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