Took me a while to figure out that 'BOWELS' is American for 'bowls'! I shit through mine, as in 'opening the bowels' once a day is a very healthy thing to do. Which reminds me ........!!
Humor - both intended and not intended propels this story into the realm of the hilariously funny. One thing comes through loud and clear - the two daughters are in charge! Amusing!
Good luck with the contest!
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Anonymous10/16/06
no, bowels are bowels and bowls are bowls
even in the United States. It was disconcerting but I got used to it.
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Anonymous10/16/06
Uneducated People...
...should leave writing to educated people, and stick to Jerry Springer reruns!
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Anonymous10/16/06
best story on literotica
I absolutely loved this story. The vernacular and spelling could be better but it was one of the best if not the best story on here. I loved the way the girls used the moms at the party. It was a new and exciting spin on all the sex stories on literotica. THX
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Anonymous10/25/06
I don't have a clever title
I liked this piece. The creativity in the use of the Halloween party motiff as a theme for the debauching of the girl's mothers got me hard (I prefer to have imagination in my porn.)
I like that you just skipped straight into the dom.daughter/sub.mother incest subsubsubgenre and bypassed any sort of awkward "how did it get to be like this" exposition. I hate having to wade through a page and a half to get to the good stuff when I'm looking for DdsMi porn. I'm also intrigued by the apparant existence of a community wide lesbian incest social network. There's potential there.
Ultimately I'd like to see more holiday fuckery. Thanksgiving dinner alone could give you enough material for a two parter. If you can pull off a good obscene fuckparty for a more atyipcal holiday like Arbor Day or Passover, I'll tip my hat to you.
All in all, a pretty good romp in naughtiness. Rube Goldberg would either be pleased or horrified, but I woun't speak for him.
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Anonymous02/01/16
Learn to spell or get an editor!
You spelled bowl wrong four times, like "bowel" as in "bowel movement." Gross!
English
BOWELS???
Took me a while to figure out that 'BOWELS' is American for 'bowls'! I shit through mine, as in 'opening the bowels' once a day is a very healthy thing to do. Which reminds me ........!!
Funny Story!
Humor - both intended and not intended propels this story into the realm of the hilariously funny. One thing comes through loud and clear - the two daughters are in charge! Amusing!
Good luck with the contest!
no, bowels are bowels and bowls are bowls
even in the United States. It was disconcerting but I got used to it.
Uneducated People...
...should leave writing to educated people, and stick to Jerry Springer reruns!
best story on literotica
I absolutely loved this story. The vernacular and spelling could be better but it was one of the best if not the best story on here. I loved the way the girls used the moms at the party. It was a new and exciting spin on all the sex stories on literotica. THX
I don't have a clever title
I liked this piece. The creativity in the use of the Halloween party motiff as a theme for the debauching of the girl's mothers got me hard (I prefer to have imagination in my porn.)
I like that you just skipped straight into the dom.daughter/sub.mother incest subsubsubgenre and bypassed any sort of awkward "how did it get to be like this" exposition. I hate having to wade through a page and a half to get to the good stuff when I'm looking for DdsMi porn. I'm also intrigued by the apparant existence of a community wide lesbian incest social network. There's potential there.
Ultimately I'd like to see more holiday fuckery. Thanksgiving dinner alone could give you enough material for a two parter. If you can pull off a good obscene fuckparty for a more atyipcal holiday like Arbor Day or Passover, I'll tip my hat to you.
All in all, a pretty good romp in naughtiness. Rube Goldberg would either be pleased or horrified, but I woun't speak for him.
Learn to spell or get an editor!
You spelled bowl wrong four times, like "bowel" as in "bowel movement." Gross!
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