All Comments on 'In and Sweet'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
fresh approach

That angle of approach was just what was needed here.most other stories come up with the"dominative and submissive" parties both being active throughout the whole story,but this approach shows how a"candidate"is changed in both character and mindset from bitchy and cold to warm and bubbly.I thank you for this story and hope that you have more in stock.

The_Fractal_KingThe_Fractal_Kingabout 16 years ago
Wonderful

This is a great take on MC stories. The subtle changes are perfectly done and the MC without an explicit controller somehow seems more intimate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story

Very good story would love to see it expanded or countinued

Iamcurious999Iamcurious999over 5 years ago
Ideal Girl

I LOVE this!

Women as they might be, ought to be, and perhaps one day, will be!

No more hateful modern women. Submissive, Sweet, and Sexy!!

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