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by Anonymous04/05/07

fresh approach

That angle of approach was just what was needed here.most other stories come up with the"dominative and submissive" parties both being active throughout the whole story,but this approach shows how a"candidate"is changed in both character and mindset from bitchy and cold to warm and bubbly.I thank you for this story and hope that you have more in stock.

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by The_Fractal_King02/08/08

Wonderful

This is a great take on MC stories. The subtle changes are perfectly done and the MC without an explicit controller somehow seems more intimate.

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by Anonymous03/18/13

Good story

Very good story would love to see it expanded or countinued

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