Celeste

surprise

I liked the real ending. Most men and women whose spuses cheat on them still love those spouse but have a lot of trouble living with that problem. Celeste was an unbearable problem to live with. Almost all prostitutes sooner or later are arrested at least once. That would publicly embarass him. He did what he had to then. Now he should move from the town, but make the police pay attention to Steve and Louie.

Real Life

Thank God that an author writes a story that is real life.We read all the bull shit cheating wife stories where the husband lives with with the cheating slut after he finds out what she is and allows her to keep on being a whore.We need more writters who have the balls to write real stories.

Great

job with this one, but I'm wondering about the std's and AIDs with no condoms. You know that she's gotta die for doing this and preferably sooner.

to me as a writer,you're a weak person

for all your writing you give in to the whores and sluts.you get off rubing the man face in the shit.it make me think you're gay or bi.one reason i say this you in your writing in this story never talked about revenge on the people who wrong you and your wife.so,this story don't sound real or have any common sense.these are the things that i like in a story.

seem to have forgotten

you seem to have forgotten the adult children.
they would be affected by their mother becoming a prostitute.

u forget alot of stuff

where is the suffering of the whore. Bob, you just don't do me right.

fuck you

Never understand

One thing I don't understand is the logic behind "Yeah, I was unfaithful, but it doesn't matter. It's just one of my little quirks--just sex--but I still love you."

Not one person with a smidgeon of common sense would confess to their partner their infedilities the way this wife did. Not one person with common sense would have her type of reasoning. Like: she's a whore and she needs sex. Oh, and she's not going to stop. On top of that she has no morals -- if she has to blackmail somebody into an affair, she does. There isn't one redeeming quality in this woman. Boggles the mind when she states that she loves him not one bit less, nor has their marriage or lovelife suffered for her infedilities.

bizzare but strained

The strangest part was the bit in the hotel room. Celeste seemed to be trying to piss Hal off, not explain. Also, Louie gets off with no consequenses? Not likely.

Target Audience

JPB,

I can see that you're still concentrating on your target audience (you).

Now I can understand an author's desire to 'please himself', but if you only want to write for yourself, then why do you bother to publish?

Personally, I read your stories to just see what sort of sick bullshit you can come up with - AND I can say for a fact that not many of your stories please me even a little bit - maybe I am just as masochistic as you.

After this story, however, I don't know if even I can read any more of your bullshit.

So do all of us a favor and WRITE for yourself, BUT DON'T PUBLISH!!

god

you know how to touch your readers emotions according to the comments. I think this one is more tame than some others that you have posted. Keep up the good work and to the one who posted that you should stop postting yor stories if you dont like them dont read them


Mike

Good Story but...

the scene where she lures him into the hotel room was crazy. How would she know he would just make an appointment instead of breaking up her essential fun starting at 2 pm? The encounter was so surreal as if she was another person. Then she goes into this lame story where she is blackmailed not to protect Hal and her marriage which should have been her top priority but stupid Steve. More than anything else that tells Hal where he stands with Celeste (behind Steve and Louie).

Why would Steve who is so concerned about Marty knowing go along with office orgies?

In the end Celeste did not want a marriage and it seems silly that after 20 years with Hal she would not know what the outcome would have been after her confession. What does Hal get out of this arrangement? Celeste stated that life would go on the same except now he exposes himself to STDs and strangers in his bedroom. What about their children?

Bottom Line: Emotions seemed realistic but the whole scenario seemed connived more of a fantasy than a drama.

SleeplessinMD

good story

almost believable! loved it.

Jurking our chain

Maybe it's just me, but I get the impression that JPB writes some of this crap just to outrage some commentors.

This story is so over the top I can't imagine anyone taking it seriously.

This a classic JPB

At least for his manic side. It has all the classic bits. A wife who suddenly becomes an utter slut with just the application of a few dicks. A wife who (okay, everyone all together now) "gives him all the love and affection he needs along with incredible sex." A husband who becomes suspicious about something and investigates. A husband who exhibits disgust over what she is doing and divorces. A husband who, unfortunately, becomes celibate after the divorce while pining away for his whore wife.
With just a little work, this story could be changed to fit JPB's other personality about a husband who would be sucking other men's sperm from his whore wife and loving every minuts of it.
Because it didn't let the husband get on with his life or show her children what a whore she is, the story gets a 75.

pure junk

bob, i often wonder how u write so many stories, but after reading this one and some of u others again, i know now. there all pure junk, i could write stories better than that. but there are a few people that likes them, so good luck on them

Hoping for the DEATH of JPB

oh well another day another wish


..please god kill this piece of crap

fuck off, Harry!

Dear Harry in Va:

Like anyone else on this site, you're more than welcome to your opinion, even if you frequently express it illogically, intemperately, and inanely.

But if JPB's stories piss you off so much you have to call for his death, then buddy, you've got a problem. If you don't like his stories, DON'T READ THEM! I know this is not an original suggestion, but it seems like the best solution.

Or if you prefer, read them and then knock yourself out complaining about how bad they are. But calling for someone's death is pretty far over the line--you have got an anger management issue you ought to be seeing somebody about.

ohio

Without Emotion but With Scripted Rote Reactions

The complaint isn't the result but the lack of human emotion in the seemingly scripted rote conversation.

That lack implies a larger lack of writer interest but to just get it over with and go onto the next story. It is a case of more is less especially with the expected of the expected.

bobie, these stories of a man with cajonies have the potential to be better scripted on a more human level with feelings and reactions more lifelike.

Everyone has been to class or presentation by someone who speaks in a monotone - never up or down and no gestures or emphasis on the important points - just drone on to the predictable emotionless conclusion expected (and with you hoped for).

I think you should try to write a romance story to learn to impart some tangible lifelike emotion when appropriate or not.

another interesting idea wasted

You have some good story plot ideas again lately, but they are being wasted on words without passion. A reader can feel how it is just an assembled story without meaning.
Honestly an editor could have cut out the black BS, whoring and office bangs and guided you to just focus on the dumpy boss and her blackmailing him again for sex for a wonderful story and then had that been the Bob decision of to divorce or not as his wife pleaded with him for going horndog nuts.
That would have been interesting and like nothing posted here.

To Harry

Get A life you dumb piece of shit. Bob entertains you and you jack off in front of your sticky computer keyboard. If you don't like Bob's stories, don't read them you idiotic prick. Calling for a person's death for writing stories you don't like? You are one sick motherfucker.

jpb is one writing fool,but he don't think well

like jpb don't used common sense in all his writings.he make men look and act too dumb.almost like he hate men or he like women that are tramp and whoresluts.i understand harry feeling,but not to wish anything bad on anyone.jpb provide a great service to us as readers by writing his stories and giving others ways to express themselves.i don't alway agree with his logic or reasoning,but i can't write.i comment good if i like or bad if i don't like his stories.when i comment i hope he improve ,not to be mean.just like harry sometimes our thinking over load our ass.

What the hey!?

As the previous poster (it says he's from the USA, but I would have guessed Latvia) so eloquently stated:

JPB has a miriad of plot lines in what passes for his head. Bob's problem is to translate those plots into workable stories. Maybe it's a kind of hand to eye coordination problem. What starts in his brain can't possibly be what eventually comes out his fingers and appears on the screen. Or perhaps Bob is a genuinely troubled person (read: fucked up).

This story, for example, is more a framework than a real story. The elements are all here for a workable story. But it is like Bob is satisfied with publishing a plot outline rather than a complete story.

Perhaps JPB is using Literotica as a kind of test ground. Perhaps he puts out two or three plot outlines a day and looks at the reaction of the readers. Maybe later he will take the most offensive outlines and actually flesh them out, then publish the longest, most disgusting book in the history of the world.

That's a theory I'm working on.

Hmmm...

I'm going to be leaving a different type of comment from what I normally leave this time. Yes I agree he should have left her, but he should have gotten the video or a copy to ruin Steve's company and the other married men's marrigages. He could have destryoed the reputation of Steve's company by making it public knowledge. This story should have been longer in my opinion. Just a reminder to others, this is my opinion. You have yours and I don't critize anyone else for theirs. As JPB says, he writes for him. He doesn't write for my enjoyment, but his own. I like some of his stories and not others. So with that, I am done. Keep up the writing JPB.

I liked this story

This story rang true. I found myself really empathizing with the husband. Well done.

Terrible authorship

Tolerably good prose but the plot simply isn't believable. JPB blithely ignores the sexual harrassment in the workplace and that makes the story incredible. As soon as brotha Louie tries to blackmail Cee, he's toast and so is her boss. Given what we see of her hubby, he'll be angry at her drunken blunder but he'll get over it and he'll forgive her. Decently written except for the gaps in the plot the size of Montana.

Shame on you, Bob. You can write better than this. I've seen you do it.

more

hmmmm made a comment on the tape, but a decent pi can get an upadted tape etc of all the activity, even get her busted as prostitute and louie for his part. steve regularly screws her and she loves it. ruin them all, marty can take steve in settlement, louie to jail, and cee onto the street. to hals' credit- he walked away from her, and got nothing from her activity. maybe a nice std for all of them?

Another no ending!!!!!!!

Another one of your shit for stories, with no damn ending. You have some good story subjects, but you seem to be to stubron about puting any revenge or any kind of a husband with any guts in them!

Fine

"During the divorce, Hal filed a sexual harassment suit against Celeste's company naming Steve and Lou as the co-respondents then sent a copy of a detectives video report to their children with a note that their momma was a whore. Then they screwed each other."
How difficult is it to use your own imagination between strokes? What an open ended story should do is allow you to use your little gray cells and finish it as far and to what end you need it to be finished.
My thought's on this story for example, she is being punished and suffering humiliations because she lost the husband and family she didn't want to lose. Her only "gain" was a mental illness that allows her to live with pulling semi-pro mattress duty. 1-4+.25=fucked up. Sounds like an ending to me.

I Wish...

That I could have given this story less then a zero. How can a woman who professes to love her do this type of thing. The further she went, the more she should have realized that she had all ready lost him.

I wish to hell,,,

you would give the men in your stories a hellofa lot more balls than you do!!!!!

seniors = 1*

CAUGHT AND BRANDED

and then abused. TK U MLJ LV NV

He did what he had to do

Celeste became a whore. At first drunk with no recollection and then blackmailed into it. By not telling her husband she became a full fledged cheating skank whore slut cunt wife and he divorced her. Bitch. She should live in agonizing pain.

Good Riddance to Exquisite Rubbish !

So she told on herself ? Nice twist. Personally I thought the blackmailing janitor had something coming to him. The story kept me intrigued but not entranced throughout the telling. Here & there, veering to the ho-hum but JPB's too much of a pro to let things go completely in the ditch.

This was about 3 flourishes of style away from being five stars. She was a little too robotic in confessing her depravity, just as he was in hearing it.

Interesting story but

Why didn't he go after Louie and Steve? He had access to her copy of the blackmail tape right? Why not sue the company for Steve screwing his wife? Why not send a copy of the tape to Steve's wife? Why not alert the police to Louie's activities or tip them off to the room they're using and have Louie and the wife arrested? It seems to me nobody except him paid a price - he ended up divorced. The rest got off scott free and simply continued on their merry way.

So Many Opinions

I do agree with some that he should have considered a knock down meeting with Louie. Telling Steve's wife - No, he wasn't an adulterer.

Notify the police for a raid on the motel after the divorce - sure.

Would he miss her - damn right but no real man could live with a whore, regardless of the many happy years.

Finally, someone wrote that she got off scott free...Nope, she'll eventually succumb to serious STD's, public awareness of her conduct and lost relations with her family so, did she suffer - eventually - YES! Well, at least, she liked it!

Thanks JPB

Meh

Thanks for the offering.

Why didn't he hire a PI and get some video?

After the divorce blow them all up. Sue the company. Send the tapes to all her family. Send the tapes to everyones relatives you can find. I mean come on! Do SOMETHING!

Thanks***

For the read.

So sad

bill

good story

I would think that he would want a little revenge on the janitor, or the asshole who made her the way she is. my goodness, they ruined his marriage. ok, she was an active partner, but it wasn't that way before. cut both their cocks off. no more breaking up marriages. their pimps sons and relatives, if he knows who they are, are probably pimps and blackmailers too. she will probably be dead in a couple years anyway. if he is getting birthday cards, he should check the post mark, for the grave yard they came from.

fell flat

He was not the sort of JPB male to accept it, so why not blow up their lives?
Why be the only one to suffer?
Especially when they are the cause of his pain, they deserve some of their own.
That is why this feels so unsatisfying.

And he JUST divorced her?

Why not get the Police involved? Louie needs to be in jail. Both as a pimp and a blackmailer. Steve needs to be divorced. And a lot poorer after he took Steve and the Company to Court. His wife needs to be in jail as a prostitute and he needed to get the lion's share of the marital assets while she was in jail. All the other men needed to have their wives and girlfriends told what they were doing. And all of Celeste's friends and family need to know she was the cause for the divorce and what she was doing to cause said divorce. No way he just walked away. Bad ending AGAIN Bob!

2nd read

liked the story from the reality aspect of it. I understand his reluctance to continue his relationship with his wife, but at the same time it was her that sent him the messages. I would like to say that help is on the way honey, but I don't think that would happen. her thought process of him getting involved I think was a reasonable question, in that she wanted him to save her. why else would she have written the notes.

since the janitor was the one that broke up the happy home and made his wife the way she was(right or wrong), then he should be the one who pays dearly, an I do mean dearly.

everyone makes mistakes, and she sure did. the first thing that would be on my mind would be how to make the bastard pay for wrecking my marriage. id give the fucker transfusions just to keep him alive. good story, as I'm sure it's happened more than once in reality.

personally id try to get her help, and try to save the marriage, if possible. Hell, she may be already be dyeing from some STD. the lifestyle may be fun for awhile, but ultimately leads to slow death, before your time.

Unfinished One More Time

One more time we assume the husband just slunk away with no one having to pay a price for ruining his world. Celeste did not even offer to stop what she was doing to keep him. She only hoped he would accept her new lifestyle.

One hopes he at least told her children about their mother the whore so they knew he was not the cause of the divorce. Also, she deserved to have to give up her entire family in her quest for strange dicks, not just her husband. Any relatives should also have been notified.

What a disgusting, depressing story and the complete lack of any justice makes it even worse.

Steve

If Steve is fucking her daily with that log, how hasn't he noticed?

@Tootlight1

She didn't want him to SAVE her - she wanted him to ACCEPT her in her new lifestyle.

OWWW!!!!

I would have sued her boss, the janitor, the company and taken the bosses wife.

Police Raid

He has enough information to have the police hit the hotel room and arrest Louie and his wife and at least one or two 'Johns'...and maybe the office building for the co-workers' gangbang or orgy. Shut that business down, put everyone in jail and ruin a few marriages. That's only fair. After all, they played a voluntary role in destroying his marriage...and family. I wonder how the children took the news that their mother was a whore and prostitute?

Damn

Fucking whore. Read it before and I have one question. What if he decided to screw someone else? She might have been one of these cunts who believes she can but the husband must remain faithful. Sounds like the beginnings of another tale. Hmmm...