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All Comments on 'One Last Gift'

by bella_arcana

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Lovely Story!

Sweet story of a devoted husband who returns from the dead to comfort his bereaved wife. Pure fantasy but written with such a poignant feeling making this story a joy to read. Well Written!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
erotic was fantastic

Fantastic story

RomanCEisdeadRomanCEisdeadover 17 years ago
Beautiful Twist

Nicely written from an unusual angle. I saw the twist coming, but wasn't disappointed by it. Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice story

Writing a little rough in places, but the story and line held me.

I enjoyed it.

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