by Erotica_Writings
Your mind is so demented, keep writing please I love the sickness of the story
That Matthew Bell may go straight to hell - feasting on all those humans. This story earns its credentials for spookiness right from the first paragraph. Very Halloween-ish! Enjoyable and well written!
Good luck in the contest!
Just because its halloween you dont have to write sick shit to make it scary.
belongs in a EC horror comic. Delightfully graphic and horrid. Good luck in the contest.
I can almost hear that sinister laugh of yours as you wrote this little beauty. Reminds me of the stories we told at campouts when I was growing up.
Another winner Darlin'
If people want to read halloween horror stories then they need to prepare themselves for the scare the gore and the graphics. That is what makes Halloween so wonderfully scary! You are still the best EW in my book
Could have used some editing to get the typos and such, but the idea and story were cute.
So as much as this wasn't exactly erotic... it was gruesome and hysterical. I loved it. Way to go. Keep it up!
Putting the gun in her cunt to kill her was just fucked up. Ugh...