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by oregon_gal

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
“Come on Over, From This Moment On, Up!”

Time for Shania Twain,

To chill your over heated brain

Something in your poem

Reminded me of someone else I knew.

I don’t know if you hate her

I don’t know if you know her

But something in the way she sings

Reminded me of the way you write

The sauciness; no bitten around the bush

Yes there are shared qualities

You would not be Shayne?

But no ancestry is needed

Where attitude and zeal

(Ok you need some talent too)

Are all that is required

To make readers like me

whistle and squeak and get wild

when I see saucy poem yet again

Written for us by you!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
I am pleased

to read you again <grin (~_~) I enjoyed your write!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Pheromoned ...

That's the way to go

Using a noun as a verb!

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