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by LeBroz10/23/06

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Pained insight of
Half a soul...

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by KOLKORE07/06/07

The strange curves of time

Somewhat too declarative (as opposed to 'showing')for a poem , still you are on to a fundamental - and old as time itself truth. The very time which seems to be your top tormentor immediately after your are left alone, later on turns on itself like a big curve of hyperbola, and become your friend in healing your pain.

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by talli12/06/13

Splendid

An exquisite portrait of words~

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