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Beyond spooky!
It gave me a total case of the chills!
Very Bizarre
One of the odder entries on this site, but it has a certain rhythm and you wisely kept it short and to the point. Can't say it was all that erotic, though.
eerie game
Something frightening this way comes. What a strange disconcerted feeling this story produced when I read it. Mr. Oggbashan, noted for his 50 word stories has extended his marvelous talent a little more than 50 words this time and we are all the better for it. Terrific Write! Scary but entertaining story.
Good luck in the contest!
Parts is parts
Remind me to hide the tinsnips. Grimly descriptive. Horror personified. I liked it. Good luck in the contest.
Terrific and creepy story
I think that this is my favourite of your Halloween entries.
Mentioned
You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout!
And the winner is
holy creepies, Batman, where the hell did that come from. I loved it. Scary, weird and something that could so totally happen. Wonderful short read, Og.
King of creeps...
I don't know if I should be repulsed or applaud that story, Ogg. It's damn scary if you want to know the truth!
The underlying tone was enough to make me either have nightmares for a few days or wonder why I didn't think of doing something like that when I caught my ex-husband cheating on me. :)
Scary!
Scary! I remember that game, too. Great idea!
Holy 'sheep' shit...
That was frightening... and oh so cool! Great job, wonderful imagination. Kudos! ~Minx
WOW
CREEPY AS HELL!
damn..
holy toleito batman! your story was fucking amazing. i loved it and the drama it carried with it the whole way.
Slightly predictable... to me, at least.
When someone asked where Josh was, and Alison replied that he would be there later, it was kind of simple to figure out that he was the body. When Alison told Elaine to open the letter, that told me that she was going to commit suicide, and the letter was her suicide note. That said, it still creeped the hell out of me! Great storytelling all around, and I gave it 5/5. :)
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