All Comments on 'Jean Goes Bareback'

by MrDeep

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jodiredjodiredalmost 14 years ago
i know how she feels

i know how Jean feels; to be so addicted to Black Cock that you'll do anything...and i do mean ANYthing...to get it again...you love it when He treats you as a whore.....your whole life is wrapped up in His cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good

I understand why white women prefer black cocks. I once tried it and was hooked. I never let a man use condoms and always fuck bare. The feeling of a bare cock in my pussy is so delicious that I don't care if I got pregnant. So far I've been lucky and must have fucked about 30 blacks bare. The sensation of him shooting his sperm into my cunt is just something I can not describe. Jean is doing the right thing. Being called a whore, bitch, cunt, whatever while fucking is just so hot. If every white woman should taste black cock they will know that it is true that once you go black, you always go back for more.

ChaniffaChaniffaover 13 years ago
Once gone black always wat it again

MrDeep

as all the others confess already I can only confess and add too.

You just managed to write it down, how it really feels.

Thakn you with a biiig kiss and tight hug for telling the world about white hoes for black studs!

ChaniffaChaniffaover 13 years ago
So stunned and aroused...

I forgot to ask if you will continue Jean's Tale.

Hopefull you will.

DeannePazziDeannePazziover 13 years ago
Bareback black - the best

Got so horny I need to find black cock right after having written this.

Drooling french-kiss

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
all married white Women should go Black,

My wife went Black years ago. She love it and I love to watch. All White Women should go Black for the thrill of thier lifetime.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Can we hope for a follow up

We wants to know how Jean continue her adventure. Will she walk at the street? Will she meet her sister in a Negro bar? Please continue this wonderful story!

johnstang2johnstang2almost 10 years ago
You know what iritates me the most:

Authors that never finish their own stories. If you are an author I personally think you have an obligation to finish the story you started. I say this from an Author's point of views too for I write stories myself just none for this site.

I notice from your profile that this was your first story ever but since you have written more than a dozen other stories. Heck you published one here this year back in March.

However you left this story out to dry. I loved the first chapter now all you have to do is finish it.

John

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

continued.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
We are waiting for more

This story is great. We hope that MrDeep could continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

When can we learn more about Jeans progress into be an black Cock whore.

Please mr Deep ad a new chapter soon!

Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writerover 8 years ago
Not bad

A good story, but the black men are reduced to white perceived racial stereotypes. Calling women hoes and sluts and the standard white persona idea of a black name with Jamal and the like. If it hadn't been for these tropes and the unrealistic 10+ inch sexual organs there is a very good story struggling to get out. If you want to go the stereotype route like Stormbringer you need to inject much more twists into the story and more humour.

I do like it a lot, it's just for me it's just a bit too cliched. But I know folk love that.

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXover 7 years ago

She's now a prostitute for someone who treats her badly? Wow, such an exciting life to live

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Why the need

Why is there a need to put the husband down so much? What happened to his cock? I'm sure she his dick wasn't that small when she married him otherwise she wouldn't have been with him to start with.

The way you keep putting white people down also shows how racist you are. There's no need for that in order to be a good author.

DebbieXDebbieXover 7 years ago
Misleading.

The description 'Lonely white wife discovers love again'.

Is misleading.

Where is the love she found?

She's simply become a cheap two dollar crack whore and in the end her sister is the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I have read the story and comments. I will add this, I work in a club where all of us are black. Men and women come here, black and white, they sit in a bar and drink, if they want they pay $20 to go into the back rooms. Once inside, it is a lot more casual, there are 2 sides, gay and hetero, I work on the hetero side. I am 32, tall, and fit. Tonight, there are 2 ladies sitting at separate tables, they pay the $20 to enter for one reason, they want to be fucked by a black cock. I am next in line, I move to the first lady, well dressed, black hair slightly greying, my guess, mid 50s+, I ask if she would like a drink, if she says no, then I walk away and the next guy in line will ask her. She smiles nervously, oh yes, that would be nice, I think so to, what will it be, a nice champagne, let me choose for you as I touch her hand, oh thank you, I come back with a glass for her, I have the same glass but I am drinking mineral water. Cheers, she drinks half of it down, my name is Raymond, touching her wrist and may I ask yours, oh Narelle, well welcome Narelle,, I have not seen you here before. No, another gulp of Champagne, I have not been here, well I hope you enjoy the evening. I look over, my friend is talking to the young blonde as another lady enters, looks around and sits down. Excuse me Narelle, stroking her wrist, I have some work to do, if you need anything please just signal. I left the table, waited 5 minutes and walked back out, Narelle waved to me, yes Narelle, um could I have another drink, of course, I took another glass of champagne to her, is there anything else, she said is there somewhere we can talk in private. I grabbed her hand, lifting her up, she took her drink, I put my hand on her back leading her down the carpeted hallway. I opened the third door, guided her in, then locked it. A 2 seater sofa, a double bed, a ensuite shower and toilet, a fridge all tastefully done. I stood in front of her, I put my arms around her, undoing the zip at the back of her dress, now Narelle what is it you wanted to talk about, as I lowered the dress off her shoulders. She didn't say anything, undo your bra, she did, mmm, nice as I mouthed her breast, undoing my trousers, letting them fall, pushing my cock against her, she pushed back. This is what they come for, all ages, black cock, they think all black cock is huge, well it varies but I will not disappoint them, I am about 9 inches and thick, more than likely bigger than they have had. I guide her back to the bed,lay her down, slowly remove her panties, I knelt, natural pussy, my tongue touches her, wet, my tongue makes her shiver, I slowly lick her, she groans, I move my tongue faster, her hands are on my head, her legs clamp tighter around me, she bucks, wetter now as she orgasms , I keep licking slowly, her legs loosen their grip, I keep licking but she pulls my hair. I move up, her legs are wide open, her hand reaches down to my cock, jerking me, put it in me, put it in me. I reach over and grab a condom, handing it to her, she dropped it, please put it in me, I lift her legs a little onto my shoulders, place the head of my cock at her pussy and push, opening her pussy, oh, oh as I push further and I stop, easing back, further this time, back, and another 3 or 4 times and I am all the way inside her, nice pussy, wet, warm, not strangling me, in fact I was enjoying it, sliding my cock deep into her, I felt her orgasm twice, holding still as her pussy spasmed around me, then I fucked her, she gurgled, moaned, tried to wrap her legs around me as I went faster and then told her get ready for my cum and shot it into her pussy, making sure she knew. all in all a good fuck for both of us, I like the older ones, they relax more, and whether its because they have been fucked more, their pussies are nicer to fuck. Anyway, that's what they come for, black cock, most are married white women, all ages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
no guns?

The author "believes" naively that marriage is a one way street. Apparently it is in the "black" community - look at all the unwed mothers (fact). however the dillusion that a loving hardworking husband would just "move over" and let the scum of the earth move in on his legal (biblically and societally) wife without retribution is hilarious!

Get real and understand the ramifications when you start seeing dead niggers hanging from trees or stacks of bodies missing limbs and tongues.

Shit happens. Bring it on, just don't be surprised.

Clarissa72Clarissa72almost 7 years ago
I get it...but not really.

I get the story and it is well written. I know it's fantasy but I am a African American woman and I don't know any other ladies who like being called a bit*h. So I'm not sure what that's about. As well I wish people would stop using the "n" word; as if it hurts. It's sad that individuals still think they can hurt others with derogatory names. It does not work; it just shows your ignorance. Otherwise the story was formatted well; flowed easily.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
False

I don't know where everyone gets this image that all black men have 10+" clocks but it is not true, only 1%- 5% of the world is above 8" , and it is divided by all ethnic groups. I am white, and I am 11", but I am a minority when it comes to big cocks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Errors

You have lots of errors your story.. You really need an Editor and NO, a spell checker cannot do what an Editor can.

This is one of your errors....... proboscis ....... it is NOT a big black cock... It IS the nose of a mammal such as an Elephant or a Seal, particularly an Elephant Seal.

patdeepatdeeabout 5 years ago
Fun is fun

Errors or no errors...I find your story a treat...I would not read to a BBC story where the black man had only 5 inches...

The_NexusThe_Nexusabout 4 years ago
Black/white

I am a well endowed white male and had an affair with a black woman. She must not have been with the right black men. She was so tight. She and I were both addicted to eachother. The color contrast was beautiful. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not bad. Shame about the bad spelling and poor grammar! And yes, it does make quite a difference. But I suppose it only to be expected.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Wow a lot of hot sex in your story. I didn't have sex with a black man until my mid-forties, a one nighter with another exec at a trade show. I viewed it then as a "bucket list" event, checking off the BBC box. I was married, felt guilty thinking about it but as soon as his tongue found my clit, it was game on. Overall, it was very enjoyable evening for both of us, no regrets.

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