I loved your story, the only problem was the words you used to describe things. The term Jelly roll definitely don't equal a pussy. Once again, not to be condescending, but the words actually hindered me from getting into it. Just watch your choice of words. Otherwise it was really great :)
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Oh hell yeah
Excellent erotica
Liked it But..
I loved your story, the only problem was the words you used to describe things. The term Jelly roll definitely don't equal a pussy. Once again, not to be condescending, but the words actually hindered me from getting into it. Just watch your choice of words. Otherwise it was really great :)
nice story
nice story i love wmbw creampies
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