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For me, these lines stood out:

...

it never leaves me

this desire to mount the girl

at the check out counter

to suck the breasts of

my best friends wife

I have neanderthal dreams

...

on a smooth rock

their chests rising and falling

like freshly baked bread

like all those bitches

laying on the smooth rocks

catching their breath.

Some sections of the poem don't really appeal to me, but overall, good poem.