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love the title
Don't you have another claw-foot tub poem?
The first part uses "we" then the rest of the poem is either she/her or he/his. ?
Okay, there are enough cliché phrases here to make me cringe a little. Fortunately, there are some smart, interesting lines to soften the impact of the cliché ones.
interesting
(~_~) I enjoyed your poetry this morn
I loved the final image
but wished it were concluded with a period. This is pretty. Not powerful as your writing usually is, though. C.o.S.
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With that kind of christening
I may pass on a shower
For a romp in the tub.
^
I do agree with Eve, the tub does seem to be overflowing with cliches. However
'twists back
to grasp and gasp at the enormity of
it all.'
did make me laugh.
I love this
so dreamily erotic and yet so vivid in its descriptions--and I love the colours.
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