All Comments on '1127 Castleridge Drive'

this story was very erotic it gets you very horny and the story is well told is there a follow up? if not there should be

And then made chills run up and down my spine!

This is a really a scary tale, well thought out and executed, plus it was "strangely" erotic as well. The ending was an absolute killer! Utterly unexpected and so perfect! Great work Jon!

J

Good ending, bad ending, maybe just a different ending.

Seems I was just left hanging.

Can we get more adventures of this fine lady and her "new friend"???

I hope you are going to do another chapter. Igot so wet reading this !!!!!

Totally different for me to read and I loved it! You might become one of my favorite authors....

The story was real good from the beginning then it took a sudden turn for the worst I think twords the end it seemed like she was dreaming the whole thing like it never happened.

It was so HOT!!!!

I love this kind of stories...

I LOVE entity type stories. And this one was very well done! Jon, you are one of my favorite erotic writers. The descriptions were so vivid! I have never read anything as lust-filled as "she could see a steady mist shoot from her cunt and flutter through the air until it landed in a scattered spray on the mattress below." That is such imagination and so erotic! Great job!

I LOVE stories of sexual possession and this was a really erotic one! Jon, you are one of the best writers on this site and one of the most imaginative writers I've ever encountered.It just doesn't get any better than this passage - "she could see a steady mist shoot from her cunt and flutter through the air until it landed in a scattered spray on the mattress below"

This is GREAT. I would like/love/welcome a reprise of the goings on at 1127 Castleridge Drive.

I love the twist at the end - it was fantastic.

Can your ghost come haunt my house?

Love the story. Wish it were a longer novel = I'd buy it.

SC you're an accomplished writer. Wonderfully imaginative descriptions. A vivid painting with words.

I especially liked the way you described 'The Being ', a force & energy rather than a usual human like figure. It, somehow, gives more power & possibilities.

A perfect erotic horror.

It's an easy 5.

Thanks for sharing.

I completely endorse loveroverlust's comments. Excellent and well done.

Of course after her affair I knew the ending before I got to it. Very well written ...

This being my first read here, very pleasantly surprised.

As my first read I am beyond pleasantly surprized. I too am a lover of entity and possession stories. Just seems to go with my darkside. 😈 Can't wait to read some of your other works!