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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve10/20/06

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It's early. I need coffee but I'm still reading poetry! I couldn't make it all the way through the poem. It was too freaky for a morning read. You brush your teeth with hemorrhoid cream. You really do, don't you? lol
Anyway, I was here. I read. And I do plan to come back and dive into this insanity again.

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by pmbluemoon10/20/06

Wow...

Very gritty and amazingly accurate in most instances...mornings are so rough!

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by Anonymous10/21/06

I can relate

being on an early schedule. This poem was mentioned in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.

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