Happy Halloween Party

Your sick

Your sick

One of your best.

Truly great black humor.

At least the ending was realistic

It was typical revenge story slop until the ending. At least you got it right with what happens to a chauvinistic mutant after his revenge.

Yeah! Okay...

I liked the rambling style of this Writer, how he sort of slips up on the story, all the while apologizing to his readers. Quite a clever ruse and an effective technique. A rambling pleasant story. Two guards and a Chaplain with the good book...What a way to go! Loved this story!

I think I know that guy

Unlike some of the others, I found great humor here. I picked up on the different style right away and was not at all dis appointed. Thanx Blues. LYG

So - Were They Just Going To Hang Out?

Oh you rambling gambling kind of get even guy. I must say that you made sense except for the ending. Another party?

Nice work Author.

With High Regard

They should have a special category just for you,

called Erotic Horror Humor.

I told you to keep up with your meds! You now how you get when you don't take your pills.

Sorry I didn't vote on this during the contest - I was out of town and missed it.

It does remind me somewhat of my story last Halloween, "Thanks a Lot". Well, no one can say we are in a rut!

Regards, Jack

Excellent

I must say you have a very twisted mind.

The story was short, but sweet.

At first I was expecting some sort of demented wimp-husband story. Pleasantly you wrapped me around your finger, led me astray, and than surprised me completely, with a creative and first class ending.

Excellent workmanship.

you still look out the whores

where is a writer with some balls.

disappointing!

For a fine writer this was kind of disappointing. No deception , no suspence just beautiful wife cheats ---husband goes crazy and murders wife and lover. Not up to your usual standard.
60 year old Gweorge

amazing.

this story is amazing. you deserve a standing ovation.
what a beautiful story.

ENJOY

I see some of your readers were disapointed, Blue. Being a fan I know your style and what you are capable of but Hey, where does it say a writer can't have a little fun now and then. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I probably should have put that in quotation marks. Anyway, I liked it, thank you for another enjoyable read. HAPPY HALLOWEEN! (only 11 days to go)

scary

As always Blue.. You're a good guy in my book.. We both know some horrible story's about failed marriages.. This isn't the worst I've heard even though it's rather sick, I've heard true story's with kids involved that was worse..But it's always worse when kids are involved.. I'm sorry for that girl though,. But it was a Halloween story after all.. Cheers Yoron.

HA!

Now this is how a cuckold story should go! Would have been nice if he got away with it free and clear, but oh well.

Very cool story - wish he had gotten away with it!

Stupid bitch deserved every bit of "never stop" experience!

FINALLY......

A cheating cunt of a whore wife gets her cumumpence....pun intended! HAHAHAHAHA!

Loved it

Beautiful way to bring lovers together forever.

I hope every betrayed man considers this fantastic way to make his wife happy.

It would have been better if she could have lived long enough to really enjoy having her wish fufilled.

she deserved it

awesome that is something for all cheaters to have happen that is great.

love it

All cheaters deserve the same fate lol
cheating worthless slut.

now that is a well done btb story. 5

Loved it

Very disturbing and well written. Five stars.

ugh

SICK