As is normal with me, the Pill fucked up this story.
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Anonymous01/29/07
Huh?
Pathetic?
Did the previous comment call this story pathetic? Just because the chick in the story is on the pill?
What kind of fucking soft-cock says and thinks shit like that? Is he some kind of liberal type faggot caveman? This was a cool story. If someone bags your story, listen only if the critisism actually makes sense.
This was very nice start for a first chapter. I love the fact that they are so in love with each other and that Jenny's brother cared enough about her not cum insider her with out know if she was protected. Now that Steve knows she is on the pill, I hope that he will cum in her in the next chaper ;-)
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07/08/07
Nice soft story
though I'm not big on the incest, bro/sis incest is always interesting.
by
Anonymous06/14/09
sis
my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her
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Anonymous06/14/09
sis
my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her
by
Anonymous09/04/11
rushed
way to rushed with no back ground telling how they got started having sex. at the start you make it sound like there was only a brother sister connection between them then you have them jumping each other. delete this and do it properly or don't doit at all.
English
Pathetic!
As is normal with me, the Pill fucked up this story.
Huh?
Pathetic?
Did the previous comment call this story pathetic? Just because the chick in the story is on the pill?
What kind of fucking soft-cock says and thinks shit like that? Is he some kind of liberal type faggot caveman? This was a cool story. If someone bags your story, listen only if the critisism actually makes sense.
Nice story Imme..*s*
Lovely sex...And...Jenny being on the pill was a good thing...Phil
Mmm nice and hot...
This was very nice start for a first chapter. I love the fact that they are so in love with each other and that Jenny's brother cared enough about her not cum insider her with out know if she was protected. Now that Steve knows she is on the pill, I hope that he will cum in her in the next chaper ;-)
Nice soft story
though I'm not big on the incest, bro/sis incest is always interesting.
sis
my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her
sis
my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her
rushed
way to rushed with no back ground telling how they got started having sex. at the start you make it sound like there was only a brother sister connection between them then you have them jumping each other. delete this and do it properly or don't doit at all.
Bad
No build up at all. No imagery or interesting detail.
One minute they are bickering siblings the next minute fucking. It doesn't even make sense.
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