All Comments on 'Forbidden Love'

As is normal with me, the Pill fucked up this story.

Pathetic?

Did the previous comment call this story pathetic? Just because the chick in the story is on the pill?

What kind of fucking soft-cock says and thinks shit like that? Is he some kind of liberal type faggot caveman? This was a cool story. If someone bags your story, listen only if the critisism actually makes sense.

Lovely sex...And...Jenny being on the pill was a good thing...Phil

This was very nice start for a first chapter. I love the fact that they are so in love with each other and that Jenny's brother cared enough about her not cum insider her with out know if she was protected. Now that Steve knows she is on the pill, I hope that he will cum in her in the next chaper ;-)

though I'm not big on the incest, bro/sis incest is always interesting.

my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her

my sis married got her tubes tyied so i can still fuck her

way to rushed with no back ground telling how they got started having sex. at the start you make it sound like there was only a brother sister connection between them then you have them jumping each other. delete this and do it properly or don't doit at all.

No build up at all. No imagery or interesting detail.

One minute they are bickering siblings the next minute fucking. It doesn't even make sense.

I liked it because it's what I like about incest stories I just wish it was longer. I love stories that are 8k words or more

When Steve is making love with his sister, and thrusting his manly cock into her, I assume he is naked, and in laying his body on top of hers, his chest brushes against her breast and excites them. If Steven has any chest hair at all, that extra "friction" provides a good stimulus and makes both of them feel better. So, any chest hair for Steve?