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by honeywldcat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Short but

So many first encounters are, especially between friends. great job, I look foreward to more(hopefully longer) encounters. may all such dreams come true.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

The description struck a chord with me. & it was hot. far too close to my own fantasies.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Friends to Lovers!

Lorena and Jake, long time friends meet again after five years. Something has changed, and after much hesitancy they become lovers at last. A poignant and moving story. A very enjoyable Read. Hot!

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
So hot!

Very well done. I'm impressed by how much you got across with so few words. You have great talent!

inspirixisinspirixisalmost 14 years ago
Wow!

Hot, hot, hot. You know how to write a sex scene, that's for sure.

luv_romanceluv_romanceover 13 years ago
wow!

i agree with ava! this is a hot scene!!! well, you do hot scene well. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Erotic

Wham bam, thank you mam! Erotic couplings, no Romance here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very nice bene of the doubt 5 stars

Romance isn't sex, it's so much more. This my dear is an Erotic Couplings story, but extremely well written. I believe in you...

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