The storyline was great, but then it came to the sex scenes it fell flat on its face. Need to explore the sex scenes, unless you want us to use our imagination.
Lani says to alan juan wasa great lover alan should have has some worries about her statement ahe made about juan being a great lover should he had said what do oyu mean a better lover! what am i chopped liver!and then push her away.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
two couples trust themselves and the other couple by each erotically enjoying sex with the other's mate. An interesting read. Pleasant story told in a mild mannered way with a lot of affection. Enjoyable!
English
Left unfulfilled
The storyline was great, but then it came to the sex scenes it fell flat on its face. Need to explore the sex scenes, unless you want us to use our imagination.
To anonymous
A good imagination is a wonderful thing to have.
I thought the readers might like to use theirs.
Lani
Lani says to alan juan wasa great lover alan should have has some worries about her statement ahe made about juan being a great lover should he had said what do oyu mean a better lover! what am i chopped liver!and then push her away.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
Mutual Arrangement!
two couples trust themselves and the other couple by each erotically enjoying sex with the other's mate. An interesting read. Pleasant story told in a mild mannered way with a lot of affection. Enjoyable!
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