All Comments on 'Hunter's Moon Ch. 01'

The present simple narration is irritating :/

has been mentioned in the New Author Review Thread in the Author's Hangout which can be found in the forum.

Mutant virus changes girl's boyfriend into a werewolf complete with a foot long cock, fangs, all the dog attributes. How does Mr. Mild Mannered Boyfriend take her - well - like a dog!

This Writer knows how to exploit fantasy to produce an excellent story. Wonderful Write!

the premise has promise, but there are some confusing point-of-view shifts near the end, and also there should be some explanation of just how the virus dominates all of humanity in just 2 weeks.