All Comments on 'Neil Ch. 01'

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CanadianMCanadianMover 17 years ago
Lucky Guy

Neil is a lucky guy.. enjoyed your first story, you wear your heart on your sleeve . Thank you... can't wait for more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I LOVED IT!!!!

I loved your story it described almost perfectly how I met the love of my life on the internet. I cried through reading the entire story!!!

SamaelSamaelover 17 years ago
Amazing

Very well written and edited. An awesome story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved your first chapter

looking forward to more-- still devastated that your hero's name is Neil, and not "Frank"

CanadianMCanadianMover 9 years ago
Beautiful

I am sure Neil felt the same way! Lovely story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Neil's wife killed herself

Just FYI.

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