by Decayed Angel
Ithought was really great them pretending that there business friends and testing each others truthfullness to each others marriage.thats great keep up the work i will be looking for more chapters.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga
well done, wonderful storyline!
just ignore the moron Aussie...
or any other commenter. Each comment will have some value to it if you consider them with an open mind.
If you need to ignore someone, ignore the asshole that tells you to ignore the other commenters.
I think that the positive comments are nice to see but are not really helpfull. If you consider the negative ones, they could help you improve your skills.
Good story. Very much like the twist at the end. Took me a second to figure out who was talking, but after the second read through, everything clicked.