The Helen Chronicles Ch. 05

this guy had to be the dumbest shit in the world

he was so dumb the story reads like crap.not real and no common sense by the hubby.

So lets see...

...instead of slicing up your whore wife and taking out(way out) some of her lovers you do what.

You raise three bastard kids and go on with your fucked up life writing these fucked up stories.

I think I would have liked myself if I sat in jail for the rest of my life convicted of MASS MURDER. I kNOW that I don't like you.

Your writing is ok but your stories SUCK because I never like ANY of your characters.


z00time

Funniest tale i've read

or was it pathetic. but whatever, it made me laugh. what a loser.

a disgrace

Thats crap Bob why didnt he just divorce ehr the first time it happenend and when that other broad showed up he should have kicked hher out the door.along with the wife.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga

a disgrace

Thats crap Bob why didnt he just divorce ehr the first time it happenend and when that other broad showed up he should have kicked hher out the door.along with the wife.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga

a disgrace

Thats crap Bob why didnt he just divorce ehr the first time it happenend and when that other broad showed up he should have kicked her out the door along with the wife.
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga

I wonder ...

if you did something early in your relationship with Helen to drive her nuts? Did you have a lover on the side before you married her? You might have loved her but she had a love-hate relationship with you even before you caught her with Herb. Perhaps she believed that you were cheating on her which would explain her anger when she was caught with Herb (Most women in those situations tend to be somewhat defensive). Let's see there was

- The Dishwasher
- The Pizza Man
- The Hamburger Man
- The Cop
- The Bar Tender
- The Drummer
- The College Boy
- The Ups Driver
- The Coca Cola Salesman
And of course, The Cousin and Best Friend.

What is interesting is this claim that you beat her. Delusions or a cover story when it was clear that she was a gang bang queen? It sounds like Helen blames you for how she turned out. It would be interesting to get her side of the story (from someone who has gotten close to her)because all of the hate and disrespect had to come from something. If she was a slut she did not sound like a happy slut busy-yes, happy-no.

Since communication does not seem to be a strong trait in your family it is doubtful that you will ever know what caused this sad chapter in your life. I do like your stories so don't let the gloom over shadow the fun you bring with these stories. Live long and prosper!

SleeplessinMD

you sound like a dumb sob,for been so stupid

take your head out of your ass,that where shit belong.

go to helen

i guess that is out of the question

Bob's the kind of guy that would be sitting in a house that is burning down around him and would say "My it is getting a touch warm in here old chap turn the heater down will you" He must have the situational awareness of a goldfish

This is a first.

I read all JPB stories. Sometimes they annoy me, sometimes they intrigue me, occasionally they fascinate me.
This one just bored me. It's just a list.

SAD SONGS MAKES ME WANT TO CRY

and then move out and on/ TK U MLJ LV NV

Not much of an ending...

...but what's new, most of your stories don't.

I can't believe that this is a true story

If it is it explains some of his stories. A soul crushing turn of events. Screwed by his mother his wife his friends and relatives. Then the courts and finally his "daughters." He's trying to work his way through that trauma but clearly it's not working because he keeps producing the same story again and again. If this is true I feel for him. Don't know if he's still writing but I'm done reading him.

Too bad you never fucked her up, even after the kids were grown.

It would have been worth it to me, to kill her 20 years down the road.