Beyond Repair

Crazy

This crazy cheating wife needs some big time therapy. Just a shame for her that she has to do it as an ex-wife.

HA

Good concept, well written.

The dialogue is very well written. The storyline is well thought out and the characters are believable. Nicely done.

dumbass

what kind of moron would marry that bitch in the first place.

mike9698 is Right

She was playing with him from the very beginning. It wasn't a healthy partnership. It was a insecure, sick woman acting out her psychosis. He shouldn't be upset with anyone but himself. He should have known better, she was a nut! This is another one of the "Stupid or Crazy Wife" stories.

Well that put an end to a bad decision

Knowing her like her did, why did he EVER marry her? And why the hell would he sign a prenup that got shoved under his nose at the last minute? That alone would have been reason enough to not marry her. Sorry, but he was a complete moron.

Another Example!

This is another example that if she is a cheat in college, during engagement or while he was dating her, she will be a cheat in marriage. I just don't understand why a guy would marry someone like this. She showed her true colors before the marriage and he still married her!!!! This then becomes his fault for being stupid. Thanks for your writing.

At least this guy woke up ...

It was a dumb act he married that bitch, after she had done he should throw her ass and period, it was clear she was/is a cheater. Good thing he found out her cheating, wasn't a wimp and divorced that bitch.

Some are whining about marrying the whore, but that's the main part of the story; he screws up and it's not Mr. Perfect, that would make a boring story or worse. What matters is that he woke up, leaved the whore and moved far away. That doesn't warrant she doesn't start stalking him ... that's normal with crazy whore. A sequel could be interesting.

HOW MANY STRAWS

can one load up until he breaks down. TK U MLJ LV NV

Bravo! Fuck Her!

You tell him stud! How many of us know a daddy,or several,who think their daughter's shit doesn't stink,and try to bully any guy she goes out with?! This broad was a spoiled cunt who cared only about herself! The EX must of really loved her,(or she was a great fuck!),because he put up with a lot more shit than most guys would! In the end,he finally saw the light,and did what he should have done a long time before!

1*

really stupid. and badly written.

*****

Nicely done dialogue.

Not an easy story to write!

But you didn't do too badly. He was lucky he had his own house, apart from the whore he married.

I grew up in a family that ran their own business, we built log homes. I worked my ass off and made great money, making enough I was able to first pay cash for a 40 acre piece of property, then built my own log home on it. 3800 square feet, 2.5 stories, not including the full basement. When I moved in, I didn't own a dime on it. In fact, I still don't own a dime!

Then I 'got stupid' and married my childhood sweetheart. She'd dumped me once in HS and went off to live with her next boyfriend. He cheated on her a few times, until she had enough and moved back home to her parents. We somehow found ourselves back together and eventually married. Beforehand, the family attorney strongly recommended I get a prenup and she had no problem with it. Basically, if we split for any reason, she got half our cash and not much else.

Life was good until I realized we were running low on bar chains and ran into town to buy another roll. We bought our chains in 50' rolls and made them up for the 16" bars on the power saws we ran. The saw shop was out so they called their other store a few hours away and they were going to deliver it to our log yard. Perfect. So I ran over to the local hamburger shop to get a burger. On the way over there, I had to pass by Lori's old boyfriends house and by damn, there was my wife's little Toyota truck she just had to have. I just about shit my pants. But I I parked and went snooping around, finding my wife on the living room couch with her feet straight up in the air, with her knees spread wide. Old Tom, her old boyfriend she had lived with, was in the saddle and pounding away. My cell phone recorded the offense and I took a few extra pictures just in case.

I flew home as fast as I could. Racing through the house, I gathered up all her clothes I could find, then raced back to town. Yep, her truck was still there so I backed up to it and started tossing all of her stuff in there. I guess I made enough racket she came racing out and when she saw me and what I was doing, she just screamed. Not my name, not curses, just a long shrill scream, until she passed out! Tom was on her heels and when he saw what was going on, he started to back back into his house. I hollered at him to take care of his new whore, because she didn't have a home to go to.

I ran straight home and locked the house. Lori only had a key to the front door, hell, we'd only been married 24 1/2 months, so I blocked that door and locked the rest. Then I told my folks what happened and that she wasn't allowed back into the house. On my way out of town, I stopped at our attorney's house, signed all the necessary papers, left him the pictures and video, then left town. I spent the next two months in Telluride Colorado, hiking and fishing in the hills.

When I got back home, Lori had moved in with Tom, signed the divorce papers and was waiting for me to get the last of her personal effects. My attorney contacted her in order she could pick up her stuff and made an appointment to come get it, but he had to be there. She was quiet and meek when she came to the house. Tom was with her and I told him to stay in her truck, if he got out I was going to kill him. My attorney wasn't too happy about my choice of words but Tom stayed put.

Lori went through the house with her boxes to fill and began getting everything she wanted. It was all about ready when she came to the box I'd already filled, of all our personal pictures, wedding photos and the like. That one I offered to carry outside myself and did, picking up a couple items along the way. She tossed her stuff in the bed of her truck and turned to take the box of pictures from me. Instead, while she watch I dumped them all out on the gravel driveway and started spraying lighter fluid on them. She screamed and lunged forward, but I had a match ready and tossed it on. Lori stood and sobbed while it began burning. When she asked why, I told her it was symbolic of our marriage and what she did to it. She kept saying they were our only pictures and my reply was so what. There was no us or our anymore. Tom had to drive them away, she was nearly incoherent.

Life goes on. Occasionally I'd see Lori around town and a few times she actually tried to talk to me, once with Tom. I called her a whore and let Tom know he was living on borrowed time and to never get that close to me again. By the time we parted, she knew I considered her a whore and that would never change and I would call her whore anytime we were even in close proximity. She couldn't take it and they moved away again.

I continued to hear rumors but didn't really pay much attention. At last I met another woman who was absolutely perfect and devoted to our marriage, a skinny little redhaired girl and a temper to match! But her love is true and strong! In the 10 years since Lori destroyed our marriage, we married and had two little girls who love the color pink! It doesn't go with their red hair but I don't care, they are perfect. We all lived in our huge log home, Pat made the house OUR home, putting her own stamp on it, so to speak.

Finally THE day came. Pat, Elaine, Jodi and I were in the local restaurant (where Pat worked and I met her) when guess who walked through the door? Yep, my ex. And man the years didn't look good on her. Once slim and trim, she was badly overweight and her complexion looked awful. We were getting ready to pay and leave when she came in and took a seat a little way from us, not seeing my family before sitting.

I helped Pat into her coat, our girls too and then with one in my arms and the other holding my hand and her mom's, we walked past my ex without saying anything (Pat didn't know her) and paid at the counter. Pat whispered in my ear as we stood there, wondering who the crying woman was that stared at us. I didn't look back and after we got outside I explained. Man did that temper fire up and I had to almost drag her to our 4 door truck. Lori could see us, and Pat was watching her like a hawk, as I loaded the girls up, buckled them in their car seats, then got in and we drove away. Pat relented on her harshness when she saw how hard my ex was crying while she watched us.

Her boyfriend cheated on her repeatedly, got her hooked on meth and she even whored herself out. He finally left her, again, and she had no where to go except home to mom. She didn't have any teeth left, so to speak and I'd heard she was trying to kick her habit, hence the weight gain. She never did have all the kids we'd planned on, so I understood her pain when she saw me with my wonderful wife and girls.

Her penance was to never have me again and she found it painful.

It begs the question

Which one was the bigger idiot? Her? She was raised that way by daddy, and like all spoiled rich kids, has a huge separation from reality. Him? He DID know better, he KNEW all along EXACTLY what she was like, and he STILL married her! How can he complain now, when he entered the relationship with a huge advantage that most others don't, he KNEW EXACTLY what she was like! His problem is not that she is a fucking lunatic, but that for too long he let his dick make his decisions! Especially since HE knew better. How do you feel sorry for someone, when they, with full knowledge, CHOOSE to put their hand into the crocodile's mouth?

1*

what a fucking idiotic mess of a story. and what a bunch of totally impossibly foolish characters. badly written waste of time.

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unhappy
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Second time through...

amazing little story. Probably the best flash story on this site. Five stars.

very good

bro love your work so much please write some more on husband's kick a bitch wife ass out of his life

The Father

A good flash story.
I really wanted to know what proposal the father had to help 'get pass this ' problem his daughter had csused !?

Too Bad

Chris finally left, but he showed some pretty poor judgement before it became too much for him. I guess that kind of excuses his seeming disinterest in recovering some self respect...

Wow

That is a stupid plot.

fucking stupid

why marry the cheating slut in the first place. moron.

That's More Like It

You allowed Chris to retain some dignity, while redeeming his faith in himself, and his decision.

The flipside of the old "Girl marrying the bar boy because she knows she can change him" story...

Not real sure if he thought she was just a bad girl and others were testing him or if he realized she was testing him all along too...?

Either way, clearly her final test was THE final test for him...

Story could do with an addition where we can find out if she REALIZES, though too late, that some testing is like testing the fragility of an egg - you don't determine that level until you've made it forever broken...

no winners

but only one left with any integrity

Gave it a five

Great flash story. That having been said, when he saw all these women at the rehearsal and found out about the test, he should have walked away. But that would be 20/20 hindsight. As for the shmuck in bed with her, well I am at a loss, me, I would get my Remington out, and probably wind up in jail for it.
As said a great flash, he should have made it clear around town that her parents raised a narsasistic cheating slut. A nice addition would have been another chapter with her side to it, but, still a five as is.

Just what i needed

Just what I needed after reading that slut Krystal o6what fucking ever story about the bitch fucking over her military husband. shewwww. I really needed one where he kills the cheating bitch, but this will have to do for now.

Excellent

Excellent summery of how the personality of one spouse can finally kill a relationship.

1*

absurd over the top insane chick.

I did it a little differently

When I came home early, finding my wife in bed with another man, she reacted as if I had shot her. And him. He disappeared, she came to me crying and begging. Me? She became a ghost to me. While she screamed and cried, I moved everything into the spare bedroom. We were in debt to our eyeballs with every credit card maxed, I simply couldn't afford to leave.

But that didn't mean I had to interact with the skanky cunt. We continued to live together for another two years and in those two years, I never said a word to her. Not one. The last words I said to her were that morning when I left for work and when she said "I love you," I told her, "love you too." That was it.

We lived in the same house and nothing more. I didn't eat the meals she cooked and eventually she stopped cooking for me. I cooked for myself, cleaned when I was done, washed my own clothes and even vacuumed the floor. But I never spent any time with her in the living room, or anywhere else for that matter. She spent holidays with her family, me with mine. My family knew what happened and that was good enough for me. I never dated and I'm not sure if the skank did but didn't care.

Finally I came home from work one day and noticed her car was gone, I went inside and found she had moved out. She had signed a power of attorney over to me so I could handle our divorce. I did and that was 6 months ago.

Life is good again.

helping a friend

A true life serial cheating wife is exposed on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com. That info and sex photo cost her the college instructor job she had for about a decade in Helena Montana

Read like a short spiteful (yet deserved) rant.

No more. No less. No plot nothing, just a pissed off man ranting at an old idiot.

Great story, well written...

Don't know for sure that all she was doing was testing him, sounds more like she just wanted to torture him. See how far should could take him before he broke down, back off some, then make another run. Sick bitch, glad he finally woke up and split. There's enough pain in the world on a good day, that you don't need to be married to it. Well done.