All Comments on 'Butterfly's Sacrifice'

Incredible! Anything I say would be damning you with faint praise! Not only were the erotic parts spot on, everything flowed...the internal logic, the character's interactions, everything!

Girl, you did a wonderful job.

Scary, hot and interesting all in one package.

Good luck in the contest.

Black Tulip

Very well done!

Penelope Street and Scintillate are synonimus.......

to amaze and entertain me...

Your characters came to life on the page and the story was riveting, but I've come to expect nothing less. Good luck in the contest. ~Minx

Now THIS is a fantastic vampire story--original and hot!

What a wonderful tale you weave. My favourite line in the story is: "but one fingertip to the suture on my tongue convinced me otherwise." But then, I am partial to filmic terms like suture. :D Again, great read, Penny!

Nice. My comments in your discussion thread.

Great story! I especially loved the suprise in the beginning, when the vampires first showed up!

Thank for an entertaining story in a familiar setting!

Good story.