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Incredible!
Incredible! Anything I say would be damning you with faint praise! Not only were the erotic parts spot on, everything flowed...the internal logic, the character's interactions, everything!
Wow
Girl, you did a wonderful job.
Scary, hot and interesting all in one package.
Good luck in the contest.
Black Tulip
Very well done!
Very well done!
You never fail........
Penelope Street and Scintillate are synonimus.......
to amaze and entertain me...
Well written
Your characters came to life on the page and the story was riveting, but I've come to expect nothing less. Good luck in the contest. ~Minx
Fantastic!
Now THIS is a fantastic vampire story--original and hot!
:D
What a wonderful tale you weave. My favourite line in the story is: "but one fingertip to the suture on my tongue convinced me otherwise." But then, I am partial to filmic terms like suture. :D Again, great read, Penny!
I liked it.
Nice. My comments in your discussion thread.
A thoroughly enjoyable read!
Great story! I especially loved the suprise in the beginning, when the vampires first showed up!
I'll never look at Fort Snelling the same way.
Thank for an entertaining story in a familiar setting!
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