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A Gray Area Ch. 02

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by duddle14610/28/06

Lovely Read!

Caden returns to California where she hooks up with Jason. Having lived in New York in a more sophisticated atmosphere she's not that wild about attending church. Found the build up for this story a bit slow but surely the Author knows what she has planned for her readers. Shows promise.

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by Anonymous04/08/10

very promising

I can't wait to read the rest of this story. you're developing the characters really well. i'm hooked.

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