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Good One
JPB -I like this one.
Great
REVENGE!
1 of your best
See you can write good stories when you want to. Do more PLEASE
Why?
I enjoyed it. However, it would be interesting to know why she decided to have the affair. It would also be interesting to know her thoughts when she couldn't reach him and then when she discovered he knew about her lover. It is a good story but in a way, it's only half a story.
Why would it matter
At first, I too wanted to hear more from the wife. But then it wouldn't 'fit' the story or the husband's character. The fact that these two had chosen not to have children gave more validity to his actions. There was to be no negotiating room. The only issue that I thought was not given enough treatment was his mental condition. He never grieved. This husband was ALL business.
give credit to the writer when dew
one of your best.give us more well plan stories.
About time you wrote a decent story.
Atlas, JPB submits a decent non-wimp story. About time!
have to agree,,, good story
this is a very good, well htought out story,,, it would have been better, however, if the author had made the woman less inscrutable; she seemed to have suffered much from her willful and heinous crimes against a man who loved her dearly.
odd thing is, she seemed to love him too, though her selfiishness seemed to win out to the end (up to the point where the husband decicded enough is enough and started scheming to punish her and do it without wishy washy feelings)
i like the cold, calculated working of the husband. not bitter but jsut cold and calculated. "don't you love me any more" she said,,, "no," he said, "I loved you deeply once but you killed it. i don't love you any more."
no attempt at tears or fake emotion; just stating facts. i like that.
she, unfortunately, turned out to be NOT as cold or calculated as he; while he's able to shut himself complete from her and proceeded calculatedly to do what he TOLD HER specifically what he was planning to do (ruining her life with information/pictures he had of her heinous crimes against him, making her family turning against her), SHE wavered and suffered deep and lasting consequences.
actually, she couldn't have done much and Trace likely won't want her now, without a job, a husband, or all these other factors that made their fucking before so exciting, etc.
again, good story.........
Good Story
But leaves me wanting to know more: How long did she have this affair? Why? It seemed she was having great sex and loved her husband. Why would she betray him like this?
But a good story. Harsh but I could see myself doing the same thing.
THE BEST ( BUT LEFT WANTING TO MORE)
wanting to know more:
JPB, you got it right
JPB, this time, you got it right! Great story, strong, no nonsense husband, w/ a true set of cojones; no wimp here! He didn't put up w/ that sh*t from a cheating slut wife, who got pregnant, knowing it was not his, & could not have been his child. This has a much better outcome than "Cynthia's Busniess Trips". Bob, I knew you could do it, I've read your "Dark Trilogy" so I've read what you wrote there, it puzzles me how you could write about a wimpy husband, who would just in effect sit back & swallow this sort of behaviour from a slut wife. Anyway, keep coming w/ this type story, & a husband who won't tolerate this sort of actions.
ONE OF YOUR BEST
This is one of your best. Fun read and no whimp husband which I like.
Roger
Great Revenge
No Wimps here!
Great Story no one cuckolded
I loved the story and the way he went after her cheating ass.
average JPB
Nothing very exciting here. The lack of any rationale from Mad was dissapointing, and asshole husband's reactions were as over-the=top as they were irrational. What about his family? What about his feelings relative to abortion? Unsatisfying.
your best ever BUT wife & timeline make No sense
every so often you write a good story
THIS is the one where you should of asked for ALTERNATIVE ENDINGs not that what do about Edie?" shit..
if someone were to do so... there are some Key points about wife...
when the wife didnt hear from the hubby in 5 days and all the credit cards were closed out and his cell phone was changed ...what did she think?
when she thinks he QUIT and disappeared only to then find out her loving dumb husband was on Vacation... what dis she think?
so after briefly talking and tell her there is someone esle ... what did she think?
did she think she had any right to get angry or upset? did she ever think well I have been doing it to him for years and HE doesnt know?
6 weeks later there has been no contact... the Power goes off she calls.... Nothing.. a week later the water... (Now we are up to 7+ weeks)
30 days later --- another 4 weeks-- a registered letter arrives from her... expressing her love. Nothing from him.
21 days later she calls.... again gets nothing decides to sell the house... now 14 + weeks ...
at any point did she ever wonder WHY he had turned? even if she did beliwve that her husband had fallen in love with someone else surely he would Talk to her a just a little? ... " I didnt mean to hurt you...it just happened..."
but there is None of that from the loving hushand
not until her phone call 3 weeks -- 15 weeks later after he stuck while she was whoring at Boston -- does she ever get around to asking what happened to you?
IF the husband had been a cold asshole or controlling guy or a tight non expressive person then I could see something like this Maybe happening. But 14 weeks is a LOOOOONG time.... for a wife to wonder what was wrong with her husband and NOT figure out he knnew something
Read parts of it before
As I remember parts of it before from another aborticide a baby story, it got a 50 along with the same private dick investigation.
Story was ok, but for your more frequent readers could you come up with a few ways of catching the adultress besides video cams and private investigators.
The only thing I found puzzling was your comment in wondering why the wife didn't go to Trace....everyone knows guys bang married cunt so they won't become attached. When the wife lost the husband, Trace for his problems lost his problem. Is the way it happens 10 times out of 10.
way to go son
Kick her while shes down she didnt know what a good thing she had while she had it in front of her face I hope Rob puts Trace where he belongs when he tries to see Mad.
Pat
way to go son
Kick her while shes down she didnt know what a good thing she had while she had it in front of her face I hope Rob puts Trace where he belongs when he tries to see Mad.
Pat
Loved It!
Mad stikes me as the kind of person who believes that they are unstoppable and smarter than everyone else. She cheated on the company who paid for her trips but she thought she could just make it up to them. She cheated on her husband and she thought that (1) he could not have a problem since she gave him guilt sex before and after her trips; (2) she always covered her tracks by having Trace only contact her at work so how could her husband know? and lastly (3) it was just sex so all she has to say is that she is sorry and will not do again and then everything will be fine.
Thanks for an excellent story.
SleeplessinMD
Vegeance is mine
says the lord. I shall repay. Why do you miserable fuckers want to read about wives treated as pets to be smacked? If she did swear oaths it was to god not the nasty piece of work the husband is portrayed as. Well rid of him I would say; not thinking straight to lose her job though.
Husband has no cause for problems with Trace. Wife behaved as free agent to the point of becoming Ms when her usual practice was Mrs; he was free to enjoy her subject only to his responsibilities to people he knew.
The only place where I can see problems with PJB's telling of the story is that there is no reason given for her setting up the Boston nest; in practice 'It seemed a fun thing to do.' is all anyone would be likely to get.
From the UK the US preoccupation with vengeance from, the president down, seems very odd. He, with many other Texans, is nominally a Christian yet he totally ignores the quotation I begin with saying that "In Texas we believe in vengeance!" There are many relevant sections in both Jewish and Christian testaments which argue against this.
One of your best stories, JPB
Great story, smooth read JPB. I usually don't agree with Harry, but in this case I too wonder if Madeline was too stupid to begin to suspect that her husband knew something (or was at least suspicious) or if she was just totally arrogant and selfish. It would appear the latter, as she was stupid enough to call Rob's bluff at the conference with the lawyers.
Plus, I wonder whose child she aborted? She was having sex with two men; it could have been Rob's. If the child was Rob's and she aborted because Trace told her to, Rob's revenge was not sufficient.
Fantastic story:
Dam that was one of your best.. Good show.. I do hope we get to get even or better with Traci
1 of Your Best
You know it was one of your best in terms of the man being strongly reactive to being cuckolded by his pregnant so called wife. Oh we can quibble about his level of vindictiveness but it is portrayed pretty close to a real life event given the circumstance.
If there is an improvement possible bobie it would have to do with the deadpan instruction manual human responses you said he felt. The responses were human like but without much emotion other than a cold controlled rage - until the end which you always have - he still loves her - that's emotion but why only at the end?
It probably is a small point, but you are so strong otherwise it is observable in it's absence.
Thanks Author
That was kind of fun Bob!
Almost a text book study of what to do if you find out your wife is cheating.
Lesson number one: take no prisoners.
Lessons two through ninety-nine: take no prisoners.
Good job!
DJ
Vengeance
Her infidelity didn't destroy him so why should he feel he had to destroy her?
Just a bit too much.
this to people who hate revenge on cheating wives
wife knock up by another man.wife told hubby she didn't want kids.wife having affair with another man which could have any disease in the book.wife betrayed husband and marriage.now to all good thinking people,why not punish her for her betrayal.or let her clean him out and be rewarded for cheating on her marriage.for you who want to forgive and eat her cum, go to hell.
Getting even with trace
You should write another chapter with Rob setting a trap for trace then getting mad and trace to confess the reason she cheated on you then get it on tape.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
Getting even with trace
You should write another chapter with Rob setting a trap for trace then getting mad and trace to confess the reason she cheated on you then get it on tape.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
Getting even with trace
You should write another chapter with Rob setting a trap for trace then getting mad and trace to confess the reason she cheated on you then get it on tape.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
there was a lot of ways to detroy a man
mentally a man is hurt when wife cheats,the manhood of a man emotions is effected.revenge or justice is the healing for the trama a cheating wife causes.the wife lover is next.
Cold revenge...
...just the way it is best served. Good story, well-written, nice job.
Amen
JPB one of your best.
Wow Bob
You HAVE grown a set of balls. Good for you. Now try hanging onto a wife for a while...
hmm
tying your tubes so you can fuck around is the stupidiest thing i've ever heard. you only do that IF you're going to be a lifer slut. and there is no such thing. as a true slut, i can only do it part time and on temporary basis. the body needs to recuperate. or sex will get boring and painful fast.
I think the easist way to hurt her and really fuck
her up was for him to have met her at the abortion clinic and told them that he was the husband and that he did not agree with her having an abortion. This would have made her the subject of a court order demanding that she not seek an abourtion through another clinic under severe penalty of the court. He could have still divorced her, had her charged with cheating and still have gotten everything plus when she had the baby dna would have proved that it wasn't his giving him more ammunition for a divorce uncontested. Plus the jerk trace would have had to supoport the child and Madeline would have had to have a bastard child hanging onto her all her life till she was so old that no one would be interested in her. You blew it BOB you blew it bigtime...
Sorry, minority vote
I like many of your stories, but this one was just too vicious for my taste. First he invades her privacy by going through the waste paper basket in her office, then he doesn't have the guts to conront her and file divorce papers, then he spreads their dirty linen around to her family and friends. Yes, she is a heating bitch, but your actions are too vindictive and too underhanded.
the Ct. Yankee
Poor CT Yankee
Illiteracy is a Bitch, ain't it? Either you could't read or didn't read the story. The Wife, knowing what she was doing, didn't confess and actually accused HIM of screwing around!! I mean cheating AND a pregnancy? Are you retarded, CT Yankee? The Husband playing HER game is underhanded?!?
A rare 100 for the Plain One
I've read this story before but never commented on it. I think it's one of JPB's best. The characters are well-drawn, the plot is tight, and the outcome of the conflict is realistic. Bob shows us the resolute side of vengeance in Rob's grim, hard treatment of his adulterous wife. Some critized Rob's character for being too harsh. Perhaps he was but I understand his hardness -- it's to cover the pain he feels from the hurt she inflicted on him.
I agree with some of the previous posters that an exploration of Madeline's infidelity would've been interesting but I understand that the "why" of her cheating isn't really important. Rob didn't care why she did it because there is no valid reason for cheating on your spouse.
Well done, JPB. I thank you for this fine story.
Bob...I don't know why you went all the way around
the block. All the husband had to do was to go in the abortion clinic and identify himself as the husband. Trace wasn't the husband and he could be charged with attempted murder for saying that he was her husband and that he approved of her having an abortion. I don't know where you were coming from simply to extend a story that never should have been. It was so ridiculous for you to have the husband act as he did. In the case Madeline would have been forced to have the child of her lover. This would have scottched their future plans as he didn't want any children. Now he could have gotten his divorce on grounds of adultry proven by DNA test...forget about them. The abortion clinic would have been in big trouble if the hadn't turned over the info to him because he was her legal husband and abortion clinics are real avid about obeying the letter of the law. So your sumise stinks ,your story stinks. I amk very disapointed in you..
the minimum
she is deceitful, all around, and a hypocrit. it is not a shock that the wronged party would extract the revenge on her. there is no 'fairness', where she showed no such inclination. he worked through it, with what he had, as best as he could. it turned out, fairly well for him, all in all.
Bob your entire story is useless
All the husband had to do was to go into the abortion clinic just after they arrived and identify himself as Madelines husband. NO CLINIC in their right mind would perform an abortion when the real husband wasn't agreeable. They wouldn't want to get sued. Now as far as everything else is concerned he could have gotten a court order forbidding her to get an abortion. The clinic could acertain that she was indeed pregnant and he could have done several legal options. He could have a court ordered amnio of her and determine the DNA of the fetus. Then he could have gotten a divorce on the grounds of adultry... He could have prevented her from getting an abortion tll the safe time was past and she would have to have the kid not that he would be liable for it...It sure fucks up two cheaters to have a kid. See what you could have done real easy instead of all the clever clever things that the husband did do...Of course you wouldn't have had much of a story which is what you wrote for. A forced plot is no plot at all and your readers are not a bunch of idiots. Get with the program..A writer that writs so much good shit doesn't have to sink to this level.
BOB
Finding out about your Boston playmate killed every feeling I had for you. I'll leave you to work it out with John. Why did he not get Trace also. The little fucker had played alpha male with him and he took It????
NICE STORY
Actually, it's a mean story but she deserved it. Well developed characters and good plot. Very creative, I hope I never piss you off. Thank you, I enjoyed reading it. Oh, and nyminus, you ever hear of adoption!
Sorry, you are wrong
Husbands and wives have no privacy to invade. Eash has 150% right to know exactly what the other is up to. Not buying into your women's lib routine...
Well done consequences story
This really showcases JPB's talent. Most of his work is at the same high level, but we do not like the characters or the plot. Rather than write the same story over and over again, or only one, JPB has written hundreds and explored all angles and personalities that he can imagine. He is an extremely talented writer and we should appreciate the fact.
I personally find many of his personagems and plots unpalatable but when that becomes clear I stop reading, but certainly he does not deserve negative comments because I am not into "horror" stories.... Thanks to the author.
Excellent work
OK, he was relentless in his revenge. However, since I was involved in family law for years, his revenge was actually rather mild. He did not trash the house, use physical violence, kidnap her, fritter away their wealth or flee with it. He was rather petty with his actions as the foreclosure and late payments would be on his credit report also. His final revenge mailing scene was a little dubious. She ought to have known by then he was serious. Oh, property purchased with community funds (money earned after the marriage) belongs to the community absent a valid written agreement to the contrary. One last comment, she could have gotten a job easily with another firm albeit with a lower rated job, the waitress bit was over the top. Also, he could have had his private investigators check the court records to see if lover-boy was divorced. Still, this is one of my favorite of your stories. BTW, I tend to read the comments first. That way if I disagree with your storyline, I just skip it. I wonder why so many who hate you even bother to read your stories? Thanks! - Ttom
Now that is revenge
Very hateful revenge. Good story though about the costs of what the impact cheating will have on all parties.
The Best!
One of the best stories you've ever written, great job!
silly woman
there was the disconnect between what she did and the impact on the bigger picture. she had no clue that her charade was up and she was on her way out the marriage, etc. its all quite satisfying.
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