why run in closet,you home and kick her ass out.you make things so hard and it makes the writers look stupid.where is a man thinking,i'm mad my wife fucking others and kick ass.husband acts and sounds like a wimp.how old are you who write this shit.15to20.
WHY would anyone put effort into coming up wth an ENDING for a crappy shitty idiotic bizzare pathetically stupid story by JPB the world'ss best writer for the sexually moronic?
we know
1) she has been fucking LOTS of guys ...
2) she did fuck men her hubby knew
3) she stopped doing that ONLY when the cunt whore wife thought these guys were smirking and starting to brag and he -- the stupid HUBBY --was getting suspicous
4) so instead of stopping she decides simply to fuck LOTS of strange men
BIIIIIGGGGGGG QURESTION IS THGIS
IF the wimp husband throws her out will she cry One tear?!?
by
Anonymous10/29/06
Easy to write
Here's your ending, you weiner, "kill 'em all ,let God sort 'em out".............works for most of your stories.
by
Anonymous10/30/06
Why Write A Part 2?
First, Jerry jacks off while 2 guys fucks his wife. Then why should he care about Edie being a slut? Is he offended because her lovers are his friends or her lovers are strangers?
Second, other than his lack of knowledge regarding her flings Jerry had a happy relationship. So what if other guys have smirks on their faces she went home to him. So what if he had some creampie from friends and strangers (In this story Edie did not clean herself up so Jerry will no doubt get some creampie that night)?
Bottom Line:
There is very little conflict from this story to cause a real confrontation. A second part would result in either an open relationship (they really did not have a marriage) or he become a willing cuckold hiding in closets watching his Edie fuck others. Therefore, a second part is not needed.
The story "John and Jackie" begs an ending but this story does not need one.
they show how dumb many readers are, since they ignore the fact that the story is just meant as a starting point!
seriously however, it's a good idea, if it persuades wannabe writers to dip their toes into the water! good show!
by
Anonymous10/05/08
come back...
... JPB and write some more. Mike from TEXAS
by
Anonymous11/29/08
Once Again
Just Plain Limp characters, plot, and story. Do you set a timer for 3 minutes and just bang out these stories. Would it be a waste to bring up the old adage of Quality before Quantity?
by
Anonymous06/08/09
Easy
Set them up to fuck again. Turn on all the gas jets after shutting off the pilot lights. Set a dial up phone in the kitchen. Let them start fucking and call home.
The fact that he came and the fact that he has to think about what to do tells me...
He will go along with it, watch and masturbate or he will join in and get off that way. I know that is how JPB would end it.
Here is my ending. I got film on her doing a man I did not recognize and I divorced her cheating ass and since we lived in a state where assets were not evenly divided no matter the reason for the divorce she got her cosmetics, clothes and her dildos. Goodbye slut bitch.
English
why not say something while she fucked up
why run in closet,you home and kick her ass out.you make things so hard and it makes the writers look stupid.where is a man thinking,i'm mad my wife fucking others and kick ass.husband acts and sounds like a wimp.how old are you who write this shit.15to20.
not bad----but
The story wasn't bad but lacked the "HEAT" like the stories "Naughty High Class Mom" part 1&2
who cares? why would ANYONE try?
WHY would anyone put effort into coming up wth an ENDING for a crappy shitty idiotic bizzare pathetically stupid story by JPB the world'ss best writer for the sexually moronic?
we know
1) she has been fucking LOTS of guys ...
2) she did fuck men her hubby knew
3) she stopped doing that ONLY when the cunt whore wife thought these guys were smirking and starting to brag and he -- the stupid HUBBY --was getting suspicous
4) so instead of stopping she decides simply to fuck LOTS of strange men
BIIIIIGGGGGGG QURESTION IS THGIS
IF the wimp husband throws her out will she cry One tear?!?
Easy to write
Here's your ending, you weiner, "kill 'em all ,let God sort 'em out".............works for most of your stories.
Why Write A Part 2?
First, Jerry jacks off while 2 guys fucks his wife. Then why should he care about Edie being a slut? Is he offended because her lovers are his friends or her lovers are strangers?
Second, other than his lack of knowledge regarding her flings Jerry had a happy relationship. So what if other guys have smirks on their faces she went home to him. So what if he had some creampie from friends and strangers (In this story Edie did not clean herself up so Jerry will no doubt get some creampie that night)?
Bottom Line:
There is very little conflict from this story to cause a real confrontation. A second part would result in either an open relationship (they really did not have a marriage) or he become a willing cuckold hiding in closets watching his Edie fuck others. Therefore, a second part is not needed.
The story "John and Jackie" begs an ending but this story does not need one.
SleeplessinMD
blackmail wife
Husband should tape the sessions for his divorce then use the info and video to crucify the pricks.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
the comments are more interesting than the story!
they show how dumb many readers are, since they ignore the fact that the story is just meant as a starting point!
seriously however, it's a good idea, if it persuades wannabe writers to dip their toes into the water! good show!
come back...
... JPB and write some more. Mike from TEXAS
Once Again
Just Plain Limp characters, plot, and story. Do you set a timer for 3 minutes and just bang out these stories. Would it be a waste to bring up the old adage of Quality before Quantity?
Easy
Set them up to fuck again. Turn on all the gas jets after shutting off the pilot lights. Set a dial up phone in the kitchen. Let them start fucking and call home.
The ususual...
SHIT!
NO RATEING A PIECE OF SHIT, THIS WAS REALLY BAD!!!
Worthless garbage
Nothing original just the so common "I caught my wife fucking so I have to jack off."
Enjoyed it
A good start. Lets see how Ohio finished it up. Thanks.
The fact that he came and the fact that he has to think about what to do tells me...
He will go along with it, watch and masturbate or he will join in and get off that way. I know that is how JPB would end it.
Here is my ending. I got film on her doing a man I did not recognize and I divorced her cheating ass and since we lived in a state where assets were not evenly divided no matter the reason for the divorce she got her cosmetics, clothes and her dildos. Goodbye slut bitch.
Damn
Do I want to see a sequel? I like the last commenters ending. Can Ohio top it? I guess we'll see...
Goodbye Edie...
...and don't expect any alimony...
OMG!
Another unfinished JPB story! Roll on floor laughing...........
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